[FIC] Beneath the Surface: The Deal.

Apr 02, 2008 14:53

Title: Beneath the Surface: The Deal
Genre: AU/Fantasy, Romance/Fluff, Drama
Chapters: 2/6
Characters: ReitaxRuki
Author: Moi (kasumikinss)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I own no one.
Synopsis: One day, while Reita spends some time alone at the ocean, someone unexpected shows up...
Comments: Ruki's POV.

| Chapter 01 |
So you admit that you've met one? )

beneath the surface, kasumikinss, reitaxruki, chapter 2

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sillygoddess April 2 2008, 22:42:15 UTC
just pondering if you are going to write this disney or grimms brother style >_<

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kasumikinss April 2 2008, 22:51:30 UTC
Uhm, I have no idea what the second is, but I don't think it'll be written like either. o.o;

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sillygoddess April 2 2008, 23:42:54 UTC
*pokes* <--- sorry If i do that much xD

the second one is the original and is very sad T_T I wondered just because this chapter, after the "split up" was a lot like dineys movie (aoi and all) xD and it made it too fast to read (like you know what happens so I just over read that part `^-^)

good luck with the rest =3

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ningen_enpi April 2 2008, 23:31:51 UTC
So you decided to continue!
* dies *
yey!
But I'm sorry for these two ;_;
and you shouldn't take so long to post the next chapter like tokyo shinjuu because I can't wait for more!
I just want to see how they will get together * again? *

LOL

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kasumikinss April 3 2008, 02:13:30 UTC
xD; Yeah, that Tokyo Shinjuu one like, died. Who knows, I might have the random urge to continue it not too far from now. But this story shouldn't die, so don't worry. (:

Guess you'll just have to see in the next chapter~ x)

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sabersenshi April 2 2008, 23:34:51 UTC
I
LOVE
THIS
!!!

And it's NOT because Ruki's Ariel..not at all. ^^
Cuz it isn't the same...not really.

But it IS good. Very good.

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kasumikinss April 3 2008, 02:29:44 UTC
xDD; Well gee~ I'm glad you like it <3

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my_turtle_pear April 3 2008, 06:18:01 UTC
i LOVE this~ you never cease to amaze me~ NEVER!!!~~~ [waiting for yoiur other fikku too~]

haha~ this reminded me sooo sooo much of the little mermaid...was it supposed to?

HAHA~ anyways~ doesnt matter cause i want more!!! reita come back!~ ru cant be alone!!!~~~

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luna_ghost April 3 2008, 17:00:46 UTC
Omg. You decided to continue this <3 *gives you a lot of cookies*
I nearly jumped when I saw this update XD

I really really like this and I'm really really glad that you're continuing it.
Please, take your time writting this XD, I know what's to be laz... I mean busy! I know what's to be busy XD

Ruki is so cute I just want him to myself <3. But of course, it will be better for him to be with Reita XD

I'll be here waiting for more! <3

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