By the end of the first paragraph I was grinning, and by the end of the second I had that funny uncomfortable wriggling feeling that your writing always provokes. Bad laquer spilt over cheap wood and embers still dying on her tongue... jeeez, Kat....
I've said this to you before, but I'm going to say it again: a lesser writer than you (me, for instance) would have a hundred words for every one of yours. It's like why Warhol painted Campbell's Tomato Soup instead of Heinz's - because it's condensed, and when you water it down it's just soup.
So yes - what clones said. Absolutely. And, everyone can speak... that hasn't happened in a while :- ) on which topic, you should post Radio Silence somewhere, if you want to. I feel greedy for not having said so before.
First time I've read a wild west AU, and gee-sus, it's pretty ♥. I can just imagine it, perfectly and all. You're the master of descriptions and such, yessiree ♥.
Yes. Just, ohmygodIreallylovethistogoddamndeath yes. The 'Bang' part is my favorite. And Demyx, oh god Demyx. He makes a sexy cowboy. (The other two do too, but Demyx is really cool in this.) And although the 'Bang' part is my favorite this line is my ultimate favorite thing, like, EVER; 'Axel hacks up a lung laughing and it feels like he just dodged a bullet.' XD
Your style in this is absolutely AWESOME. I love it. It's different and it fits them just right. Your descriptions are my favorite part of your style though :)
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Just the way you put together words. I don't even know what to say. ♥
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I've said this to you before, but I'm going to say it again: a lesser writer than you (me, for instance) would have a hundred words for every one of yours. It's like why Warhol painted Campbell's Tomato Soup instead of Heinz's - because it's condensed, and when you water it down it's just soup.
So yes - what clones said. Absolutely. And, everyone can speak... that hasn't happened in a while :- ) on which topic, you should post Radio Silence somewhere, if you want to. I feel greedy for not having said so before.
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There has been a dearth of wild west AU's in this fandom that I am desperately trying to fill.
(And by fill, I mean writing this very, very short story.)
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The 'Bang' part is my favorite.
And Demyx, oh god Demyx. He makes a sexy cowboy. (The other two do too, but Demyx is really cool in this.)
And although the 'Bang' part is my favorite this line is my ultimate favorite thing, like, EVER; 'Axel hacks up a lung laughing and it feels like he just dodged a bullet.'
XD
Your style in this is absolutely AWESOME. I love it. It's different and it fits them just right.
Your descriptions are my favorite part of your style though :)
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