[OS - Tegomasu] The lucky one

[kataomi]

Title: The lucky one
Pairing: Tegomasu
Type: Yaoi
Rating: PG-16
Comment: A special gift to a special friend. Bunny ! I hope you will love it as I love your TM dolls !!! READERS ...please dont forget to comment please !  Pour la version française cliquer ici !!!
Translation: Me and Hanapi
Summary: 1001 ways to praise Massu's body - by Tegoshi

Comments

[bunny_alice]

[cherribells]

I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC <333

I love how you were so detailed and descriptive to the point of giving me nosebleeds. Massu's shower scene...oh gosh that was amazing LOL XDDD (LOVE YOU TEGO! <3 Breakfast can be prepared for later ;D )

Completely drew me in, very well-written, and Tegomass were in character and spot on throughout the fic. Both of them were... >3> -KYAAAAA- I can totally imagine this happening hahahaha 8D Tegoshi is one lucky man just for being by Massu's side~

I'm also lucky for being able to read this wonderful fic! Thank you so much for sharing and I hope you will write again soon :3

[kataomi]

Ouaw thanks ! Your comment make me really happy !! The too much descriptive stuff were because I really wanted to FEEL it. One day I hope I can assist at a shower scene in live of Massu XDDD.

Thank you for reading !! ^^

In fact I have an other fanfiction of written in french. I have to translate it and make my sister remove the mistakes after ! ( My english isnt the best as you can see XD ...I need some one to beta the english ! )

[cherribells]

No problem love! And if you felt it while writing, THEN GOODNESS ME I FELT IT WHILE READING XD -sighs- Every fan girls dream...

AND GASP O: ANOTHER FIC!? 8DDD

If you're looking for an English beta, I'll be very happy to assist you ^^ It's good practice/experience for me since I'm in a literary magazine staff for college. My editing skills needed work ever since I started editing other people's original poetry/fiction >< But I'll do my best with whatever I can <3

[kataomi]

Ohhh that would be great ! But I need someone that understand french too so they can read the meaning and decide if it's ok or not like I translate it ! :(

The next fiction should come next month I think. I'm gonna translate it soon and then my sister will need to verify it ...but she got a lot of homework so ^^''

[himitsu_17]

I totally love how you wrote it !

The descriptions, the story, the shower, the perfect sexiness and perfection!

Thanks dear!

[kataomi]

Thanks !!! ^^ I'm happy that you liked it !!!!

[melib2]

so sweet!! i love it! ^_^

[kataomi]

Thanks ^^

[arigatouima]

wow this was beautiful, I'm so happy you decided to write a fic like this. It really captured how Massu is slightly insecure about his body though he has no reason to - because as described here too it's just perfect.

[kataomi]

Thanks !!! ^^ I Really hope that Massu will one day realize that his body is awesome ...and even if he dont find it perfect .....it dont mean it isnt !