[OS - Tegomasu] Surprise

Dec 30, 2013 09:34


Title: Surprise
Pairing: Tegomasu
Type: Yaoi
Rating: PG-13
Authors: bunny_alice and kataomi
Comment: I wrote this with bunny_alice ! I wrote a part, she wrote her part and we continued like that until the end. I passed after to add details and make it look more united. bunny_alice corrected all the english mistakes !! ( She certainly had a lot of corrections !!! SORRY )

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Comments 11

cherribells December 30 2013, 17:04:30 UTC
ASFHDJKSHGLAFHHFLDHA (///▽///)

'Masuda lifted Tegoshi's face holding his chin and looked deeply into his eyes.

"You look even more adorable now. I prefer you like that." '

BRILLIANT. Everything about it. BRILLIANT. I flailed. I squealed. I laughed. I blushed. I love it. MassuxYuuko interaction FTW. AND MASSU'S SISTER LOL. WELL DONE YOU TWO (*≧∇≦*) Ahhh, Tegomass~ My heart is flying right now ♥♥

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING /continues to flail

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kataomi December 31 2013, 17:04:47 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting ! Your comment made me really happy !! It was my first time writing directly in english because I was writing with Bunny.... so Im happy that you like it !!

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yryumi December 30 2013, 18:08:22 UTC
this is sooooo ❤❤❤
i love the confession part! the kiss..es ❤❤ (>////<) ❤❤❤❤ and the beginning of the story massu "doesn't think he will be strong enough to see someone else by his side" AAAAAAAAAAAAAH ❤❤❤❤

oh my ❤ so full of hearts :DD thanks for sharing! :'3 ❤

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kataomi December 31 2013, 17:07:55 UTC
Thank you ! Im happy that you liked it !!! ^_^ Thank you for your comment !!!

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melib2 December 30 2013, 20:25:48 UTC
IS SO AN ADORABLE FIC! Thank you for sharing! you two are great together you have to contniue this fic please???

ATTE

Meli ( since today Im your big fan now !!! )

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kataomi December 31 2013, 17:10:15 UTC
Thank you for reading and for your comment !! I dont think we will continue this OS but we might write again together !!! We already wrote chocolate together too !

Omg we have a fan now !? Im really happy !! Thanks <3

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melib2 December 31 2013, 23:28:56 UTC
is a pleasure be your fan ^_^

I will be waiting your next fic <3

Happy news year dears!

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kawaling December 31 2013, 04:55:39 UTC
I truly believe that Massu prefers Tegoshi when he's not wearing those girly clothes :P
Love them!! They are so cuuute!
Thanks for posting!

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kataomi December 31 2013, 17:12:23 UTC
I agree on that lol ! But he seemed quite appealed by Tegoshi's cheerleder outfit in Mahou tour and I would have loved to see his reaction to tegoshi's latest girly outfit !! That is why we wrote this !!!

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sayukino11 December 31 2013, 09:42:15 UTC
Aww...... Its so adorable.... I believe this is the first time i comment here....

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kataomi December 31 2013, 17:13:08 UTC
Thank you for reading and for commenting !! Comments means a lot for me !!! <3

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