Collide: Chapter two, part one

Nov 05, 2006 22:53

And some more :) A little bit more backstory and some new settings & characters. As always, reviews of any kind are more than welcome :)

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth ( Read more... )

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figliaperduta November 6 2006, 03:59:22 UTC
Oooh, I like th--

--REGULUS. SHINEY.--

--is more and more.

And oooh, Regulus. Must know more, must, must.

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kyasuriin November 6 2006, 04:09:48 UTC

haha, thanks. there will be more regulus, no worries :D

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figliaperduta November 6 2006, 04:12:13 UTC
YEY!

More coherent review in December. Right now, too much caffeine, too little sleep.

NaNo affects the brain in strange ways. Like, removing the N from random words, so strange came out strage.

I like that. Strage. I wonder if it has a definition. *goes to look it up*

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figliaperduta November 6 2006, 04:12:59 UTC
It doesn't!

Shall we make one up?

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kellygreen November 6 2006, 04:12:48 UTC
SO GOOD. HURRY UP AND POST MORE!!!11!!!!1

Seriously though, I love it. <3

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kyasuriin November 6 2006, 04:18:23 UTC
:p

HURRY UP AND GO FUCK OFF!

Seriously though, I love you.

*grin*

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kellygreen November 6 2006, 04:29:38 UTC
:O

This is how you treat your loving readers? I am appalled. APPALLED.

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kyasuriin November 6 2006, 04:34:44 UTC

oh baby you know you love it

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ekaterin24 November 6 2006, 04:17:47 UTC
Excellent! You've got some wonderful plot threads going here! And the monosyllable thing, gosh, takes me back to my high school days (which budding romances often do, well into one's twenties, thirties, forties...)
Did I mention I love that in this reality, Remus is a librarian (like me?)

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kyasuriin November 6 2006, 04:24:20 UTC

gah, you're a librarian?! I'm doing my MLIS right now *GRIN*

I've always sort of wanted to write him as a librarian and started another AU in which he was one and have thus combined them to save me on brain space :) More library stuff to come since I'm a dork like that, heh.

Of course thank you so much for the lovely review. I've been lucky enough to not be infected by the monosyllabic monster (I instead have the babbling monster like Sirius gets sometimes, heh). Oh poor Remus.

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ekaterin24 November 7 2006, 01:30:20 UTC
Yay! a fellow librarian!
Sooo, is Remus going to spend all his time at the checkout desk or does he work on the reference desk too? I can see Sirius swaggering over and asking a very interesting reference question or two 8->

Re: romance, I traditionally had either the total silence or monosyllables, occasionally varied with the babbling monster. Now I'm married and don't have to worry (though I still babble, my poor husband!)

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maybeido November 6 2006, 04:43:36 UTC
DFJKSKLDFJLSDFK

REGULUS. Brilliant!!!!

I am so, so in love with this. As I'm sure I've mentioned already, but I thought it needed repeating!! <3

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kyasuriin November 6 2006, 16:03:44 UTC

teehee, thanks. :D A lot of secret Regulus fangirls in the crowd, intriguing... and thanks so much for reading & commenting, I'm so glad you're enjoying it :)

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skysparcz November 6 2006, 05:56:51 UTC
Man, this is a good read so far. I love nervous Sirius far too much. Can't wait for more!

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kyasuriin November 6 2006, 16:05:21 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and I too have a penchant for both a smooth and a nervous Sirius. Hopefully more will be forthcoming soonish!

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