Collide: Chapter three, part three

Nov 16, 2006 18:27


so I lied... I really did mean to make this longer and include material that would not be safe to read at work, but I do have an interview tomorrow and three assignments due and well, you get the picture. Chapter three will just be in four parts instead of the three I had intended. I hope you enjoy this part and look forward to the next, as I'm ( Read more... )

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kyasuriin November 20 2006, 06:09:52 UTC

thanks so much ♥

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aquila_star November 17 2006, 22:37:19 UTC
Oh, I love Sirius taking care of him. It's such a parallel to their relatioship as it could have been, an dit's so sweet and tender. And hot too, for good measure.

I love watching your word meter and knowing we have lots to go.

I have to tell you, this is one of my most eagerly anticipated WIP's right now. I'm loving it.

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kyasuriin December 2 2006, 03:01:17 UTC

I do too, I think that Sirius for all his bravado is a sweet person :) I'm so glad you're liking it and am terribly sorry about the delay in commenting, I forgot to go back to this chapter to reply to the lovely feedback. I suppose better late than never!

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shaggydogstail November 17 2006, 23:11:51 UTC
You know, it's a times like this that I think being a werewolf really isn't all that bad. Or at least, it has it's compensations. ;)

Keep up the good work!

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kyasuriin November 20 2006, 06:10:52 UTC

heheh, too true. oh the things I'd do to have Sirius looking after me... *grin*

thanks!

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skysparcz November 18 2006, 00:45:51 UTC
God, Sirius is just the biggest sweetheart in this. More more more!

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kyasuriin November 20 2006, 06:11:34 UTC

yeah, he is at times. I hope it isn't OOC! *blush* thanks :)

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bare_bear November 18 2006, 00:59:13 UTC
well. I don't think i've commented before, but this is seriously my favorite story right now. I love these, the stories taht are all, au but all about how these two got together despite not knowing eachother in shcool. I look forward to every update.

Sorry about spelling and grammer and other nonsuch. I've spent the last 5 or so hours in the local university pub for the official Friday Afternoon Piss-Up, and am not very coherent. I'll probably be delighted again tomorrow to see this update. Which makes me rather happy, since I reall enjoyed this one. :)

Happy writing, and thanks for sharing. :D

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kyasuriin December 2 2006, 03:04:04 UTC

I'm sorry, I'm like the worst commenter ever. I somehow missed this chapter while replying to feedback. agh!

In any case, I'm always so flattered by your comments. Thanks so much for commenting & I'm so glad you're enjoying the story (in addition to your afternoon *g*)

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