Comments | katcollides: Collide: Chapter Three, part four

kyasuriin in katcollides

Collide: Chapter Three, part four

Nov 20, 2006 12:12

I am so sorry for the wait. I'm still not entirely happy with this part but I really can't afford to play with it any more, so here it is. One day I'll go back and edit and make everything perfect (or at least to my standard of perfection) but for now I offer you an imperfect part with my apologies.

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry ( Read more... )

collide

Comments 25

looooongjacket November 21 2006, 00:38:57 UTC

guuuuhhhh why is this so good?
as evil and twisted as it sounds, i'm glad you're only 31% because that means there's so much more to come.

kyasuriin November 22 2006, 04:23:25 UTC

heheh, you're allowed to be evil and twisted :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, I hope you liked the other 2/3rds as they're written!

chiastica November 21 2006, 07:01:18 UTC

Ohhh, wow. This is definitely my favourite WIP right now; I check my friends' page all the time to see if you've posted. I don't blame Remus for falling so hard for Sirius' charm at all... hell, I'd do it too :D

kyasuriin November 24 2006, 16:59:41 UTC

thanks so much for commenting :) I'm glad you're enjoying it!

anonymous November 21 2006, 20:42:49 UTC

I'm so glad this fic is in my life. Really. I check maybe 329734983 times per day for an update. Now that's true love :)

Full of so many subtleties. Love that.

kyasuriin November 24 2006, 17:00:14 UTC

aww, thanks. *blushy* I usually try to post every day or two but it's not always possible, so apologies!

ekaterin24 November 22 2006, 02:51:28 UTC

Ooh, this bit of storyline is holding-my-breath wonderful!

I can see where you might want to tweak some wording a bit (please let me know if you want any gentle suggestions) but agree you *had* to post it!! Couldn't hold back the actual *making love,* as Remus put it so rightly. He's in too deep now and *will not* back out (though he may attempt it)!

This is my favorite R/S fic series now.

kyasuriin November 24 2006, 17:01:43 UTC

thanks!

I'm goiing to hold back on editing until the entire thing is done and then sit down and go hardcore with the beta'ing but if you'd like to give suggestions along the way, you're more than welcome :)

librarynoise November 22 2006, 04:24:15 UTC

GNAUGH. This is lovely, and hot, and lovely.
And also hot. Keep writing, I am loving this series!!

kyasuriin November 24 2006, 17:02:23 UTC

hehe, thanks :)