Collide: Chapter 5, part one

Dec 14, 2006 22:34

I had a funny feeling that as soon as I posted my apology, I would feel the urge to write again and lo and behold ( Read more... )

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vera_dicere December 15 2006, 05:24:05 UTC
o you are a saint! this was just what i needed after a 3 hour latin exam. i could kiss you! except...well, not really. this all being done electronically and whatnot. hm. whatever. consider yourself kissed! X3

[sorry. teh crazy spreads when i'm tired. ^^;]

anyhow. loved it. i knew sirius couldn't be a bad guy. i mean, duh, remus. he's friends with lily. but o, this was sad. i hope everything turns out okay. i mean, of course it will! they're fabulous together! even if there's more rough patches...like trust issues. it'll all work out in the end, i'm sure.

yay for updates! thank you muchly. ^________________^

and! you get the boykiss icon, because i love you that much

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kyasuriin December 16 2006, 00:11:17 UTC

aww, I'm so glad to hear it! I hope the exam went well? If it's any consolation, I admire you for even trying!

Pssht, yeah.. I love Sirius too much to make him the bad guy, at least not in a major antagonist way. And yeah... I'm so glad you're enjoying it :) (am also tired, it seems).

& your icon is gorgeous. *stares* *stare some more* mmm....guh...

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kyasuriin December 15 2006, 14:51:13 UTC

*flails* (and also, best possible way) :)

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aquila_star December 15 2006, 05:37:07 UTC
Oh Remus. Somehow this hurts more than the last chapter. I want more. As soon as you are able, if you please. *begs you and gives you cookies*

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kyasuriin December 15 2006, 14:56:10 UTC

I do feel for him too.. although, it's funny how everyone sympathizes with Remus and absolutely no one has said, 'omg poor Sirius being obliviated! Remus is a jerk!' I think this may have something to do with my blinding love for Remus and how I write him though.

ooh, cookies! now I have to write! thanks so much for commenting :)

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aquila_star December 15 2006, 18:52:31 UTC
For my part I think it's that we're seeing it from Remus' perspective...it brings his struggles to our attention, while we aren't seeing it through Sirius' eyes.

Still I am dying for more. You've really got me hooked.

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chiastica December 15 2006, 05:43:49 UTC
Oh wow... I was hoping beyond all hopes for a twist like this. I think Remus deserves some love in his life.
I'm also hoping beyond all hopes for a happy ending :D:D:D:D:D:D

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kyasuriin December 15 2006, 14:50:40 UTC

I think he deserves love too, he's so tortured in canon, poor boy.. thanks for reading, and while I can't promise happy endings (as I'm not done writing), the next part should be less angsty than this part (although, could I get more angsty?)

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germanbee December 15 2006, 06:01:42 UTC
I nearly jumped out of my chair in excitement when I saw that you were back and had updated. Instead I just screamed, and had three very worried roommates running down the hall to make sure I hadn't offed myself.

Poor Remus, though! I almost cried at the first half; Remus really deserves happiness, more than anyone in canon. And Sirius, oh! I knew he couldn't be a baddie!

Are we going to see more Lily? Perhaps she'd be able to help; afterall, she got them together in the first place, basically.

I love you with all my puppy-shipper heart, I do.

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kyasuriin December 17 2006, 00:22:49 UTC

haha, I love when that happens (the getting excited, not the roommates getting worried)

and yup, more Lily will be forthcoming. In fact the next part features her :)

♥ I'm so glad you're liking it :)

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