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Collide: Chapter 5, Part Five

Jul 30, 2007 23:38

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall; this part is PG
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth about his strange disappearances and injuries. He can't stand the look on their face when he tells them the truth so ( Read more... )

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zafu July 31 2007, 06:03:23 UTC

I was so glad to see an update. Best part of the whole day. Can't wait for another. Will they ever just not mess it all up? XP And now that Remus's lycanthropy is just completely on display for Sirius' pondering and prodding...I really just can't wait for more!

kyasuriin July 31 2007, 11:43:00 UTC

I'm glad to update and glad you're still reading *G* Shall try not be quite so long with the next part, especially since I really love it. *zips lips*

zafu July 31 2007, 20:07:03 UTC

Tease! XP I'll be looking forward to it!

tinocka July 31 2007, 07:39:09 UTC

God, I love this story! Though, I want to shake some sense (sp?) in both boys! :D

I´ll be looking forward to next update.

kyasuriin July 31 2007, 11:43:46 UTC

Though, I want to shake some sense (sp?) in both boys!

you and me both! :D Thanks for reading!

xrated13 July 31 2007, 08:49:58 UTC

Hahahahaha. Oh Sirius, such insensitivity! :) That was wonderful.

kyasuriin July 31 2007, 11:44:19 UTC

*grin* Not really used to being around werewolves, is he? heheh. Glad you enjoyed :D

cobalt_violet July 31 2007, 13:16:23 UTC

I should really come out of lurkdom and point out I've been reading this for a long while, and so it's a delight to see a new chapter! I love it, and I adore the originality of the series. Long may it continue, and I look forward to the next part! ^_^

Psst... typo in paragraph two of the motorcycle riding scene - 'swerved', not 'swirved'. God knows I've done enough typos, so I thought I'd give you a heads up.

kyasuriin July 31 2007, 13:57:18 UTC

I'm delighted you're reading as I'm a big fan of your writing :) Thanks for the comment!

thanks sooo much for picking up the typo! My friend actually mentioned it to me a couple days ago and I completely forgot to change it. *headdesk*

momebie July 31 2007, 14:10:29 UTC

Ah, good to have them back. :) And good work, as always. *snuggles*

kyasuriin July 31 2007, 14:20:37 UTC

*is snuggled* yay! :)