Literary Criticism

[katead]

Title: Literary Criticism
Author: Katead
Rating: PG
Fandom: Canon (or possibly anti-canon)
Characters and Pairings: Holmes/ Watson
Summary: Watson is less than pleased with Holmes' attempt to help him with his writer's block
Warnings: None other than shocking lack of plot, though if you haven't read BLAN (and maybe MAZA) it wont make much sense at all.

Comments

[storyfan]

Holmes is so infuriatingly logical.

You've got the voices right down and I could see the whole scene in my wee brain as it played out. Stories like this can lull me into thinking that Holmes and Watson were real people.

[katead]

A compliment indeed! Also I'm delighted to hear you could see it play out, that's such a fantastic thing to hear :DD

[innie_darling]

Oh, I really liked this.

[katead]

Oh good, that makes me happy :D

[verilyvexed]

I laughed at loud several times during the story, but the end turned me into a puddle of elated goo. Gorgeous. Love everything about this!

[katead]

Hurrah! Always happy to turn a human into a puddle of elated goo :DD and so pleased it made you laugh, because I was worried that my attempt at humour had fallen flat on its arse ;D

Thank you so much for making me blush first thing in the morning, I'm set up for the day now <333

(loving the icon btw XD)

[verilyvexed]

So happy to have made you blush - it was well earned! 8D

Thank you! Am madly in love with your ? ? ! icon. XD

[queerlyobscure]

I tried to concentrate on breathing deeply and telling myself that I would miss him later if I succumbed and killed him now.

I think you may have summed up Holmes and Watson's relationship right there. Poor, long-suffering Watson ::sigh::.

This was all very sweet and hilarious and I love it and would rather like to roll around in it and squeal delightedly, but I suspect I would frighten the horses.

Apologies for the horrendously late comment.

[katead]

Yay thank you! He is a saint, isn't he? Pfft, don't worry about the horses, they don't do much anyway :P

No need to apologise, hey I still have comments to your past 2 Holmes/Trevor fics half formed in the back of my head (I hate not having internet at home).

[flavored_taser]

THE COMMAS, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH THEM

I WILL VENTURE INTO FOREIGN TERRAIN TO RESCUE THEM IF NEED BE

Just, please, it hurts my mind to read dialogue without commas.

“For God’s sake(,) Holmes!” I let loose as soon as I had slammed the front door, something that, I regret to say, felt absurdly satisfying

“Really(,) Watson, such language and you’re hardly in the door.” That I could hear the smirk in his voice made it even worse. My temper, already frayed to breaking point(,) ceased paying any attention to my rational mind (which was rather coming around to the point of view of my temper itself) and I marched into his study.