This is so *raw*. Bruce was killing me, and Babs.. I think Babs kills me the most because she's dealing and not dealing.
Oh, dear. All the aftermath. The coping. Everyone is so lost. The emotion in this is perfect, I could almost taste it. Great job. I would love to see what happene after, and before, too. How's accounted for and who isn't, and see Bruce spring to action because it hurts to see him so lost. In any case, great job! I really enjoyed this!
I just have to say I spent a good hour looking for this fic today. I remembered and I wanted to re-read it so badly.. and I found it, yay! It really struck a cord the first time, I have so much love for it. Just wanted to say it... because re-reading is <3
My favorite part is definately being in Dick's brain as he and Time are together, followed closely by little Lian. Writing that scene was particularily hard, so I'm glad you liked it, and Lian is heartbreaking, isn't she?
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Great job, by the way. Loved the angst, I felt so bad for these characters. :)
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*nods in agreement*
I'm up for a sequel, and I'll poke ospreyphoto until he agrees to lend me his (wonderful) brain for another fic.
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Oh, dear. All the aftermath. The coping. Everyone is so lost. The emotion in this is perfect, I could almost taste it. Great job. I would love to see what happene after, and before, too. How's accounted for and who isn't, and see Bruce spring to action because it hurts to see him so lost. In any case, great job! I really enjoyed this!
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*smiles* Wish I could take credit for that bit, but it was ospreyphoto's idea.
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Writing that scene was particularily hard, so I'm glad you liked it, and Lian is heartbreaking, isn't she?
Glad you enjoyed it.
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