there was nowhere else to go

Jan 24, 2007 18:31

his eyes are the least mysterious thing about him.
the smile when only a few feelings are visible holds
much more secret
that his cold blues ever will.

he is an ocean,
an all-consuming
redefining
wave.
he rearranged my entire life in just six months.

i didn't know i was so mobile.

jared

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ocean thekilltwins January 25 2007, 15:27:37 UTC
beautiful.....

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wwoftheechelon January 26 2007, 03:03:55 UTC
Lovely.....

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julia_goolia January 26 2007, 06:29:17 UTC
i love this so hardly.

his eyes are the least mysterious thing about him.
so ironically true.

i didn't know i was so mobile.
!!!! that's the killer line, there!

this icon is perfect for this poem btw! and why do i suddent hear "FROM YESTERDAY" in my mind?

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