She

Oct 08, 2006 11:46


She lives a content life in a most modest way,
goodness incarnate I like to say.
She gives all her love to any soul,
no matter how big nor small.

For thirty-five years she has doted on one man,
who has fulfilled each and every one of her dreams.
But if anything she has given more back to him
as he is the receiver of the radiant glow that is she.

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jennibeans October 9 2006, 01:31:06 UTC
I love the image you use of God seeing an image of Himself reflected in a human.

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katieh85 October 10 2006, 02:26:39 UTC
What an excellent poem. The symbolism was really good.

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kath_85 October 11 2006, 10:56:24 UTC
Thanks for the comments ladies! needs a lot of work done to the poem, but I'll get there when I have a bit of spare time :)

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