Drabble: Fortune Telling

Jan 26, 2010 11:45

Dexter's Plan, Part 3
Disclaimer: Actually, yes, these characters do belong to me, as I created them and have nurtured them to life. Though at one point I in fact killed Michele. But nevermind that now. And I promise to give these better titles at some point.

Fortune Telling )

dexter, writing, vampires, drabble

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digitallace January 26 2010, 20:08:00 UTC
*tee hee* Cuteness!! I like these characters

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kathrynmichele January 26 2010, 21:38:09 UTC
Thanks, mama!

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lilyginny27 January 26 2010, 22:08:38 UTC
What the heck, where are they?

Solid ground is a misnomer. They could be on a bridge over open water, on a skyscraper, on a tall pointy thingy like a radio tower... ;)

LOL

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kathrynmichele January 26 2010, 22:10:25 UTC
true. she does have her eyes closed at that point, so it just feels like ground. but perhaps a few more descriptive words would go well here.

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lilyginny27 January 26 2010, 23:21:25 UTC
LOL I hope you didn't take that the wrong way. I was excited at trying to guess where they could be since they 'went higher' than it was which lead me to expect it's on top of something, maybe even a hill or something.

I thought you were clever w/ leaving it so blase'. It adds suspense!

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kathrynmichele January 27 2010, 00:01:02 UTC
No, I didn't take it the wrong way. It just made me think, that's all. Good comment!

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