[fic] I'm An Animal Trapped In Your Hot Car

[kathy20121]

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Pairing: TYL Hibari Kyouya and (original timeline) Yamamoto Takeshi
Word Count: 2,042
Rating: M
Timeline: Future.
Disclaimer: I don't own KHR
Summary: After two years of having arrived to the conclusion the Vongola Hunt had gotten to Yamamoto Takeshi, the cloud guardian had long gone come to terms with it. However, he

Comments

[chinpirako]

Yay, a 8018 fic! That's an interesting view, that TYL Yamamoto was deemed as a coward by Hibari, it gives things a new perspective or something?

I liked your TYL Hibari, he's pretty seductive and has that air or self-confidence...pretty nice!

I think your Yamamoto is maybe a little too meek, but other than that quite Yamamoto-like.

Thank you for the fic :)

[kathy20121]

Thanks so much for taking your time to read and leave a comment, it means a lot! =)

Oh, thanks. I was actually more concerned about Hibari than Yamamoto, but now that I think about it, I think Yama did give in quite easily (that was my laziness + not wanting to make it that long xD), but I'll take it into account next time! =)

^^ you're welcome, thank you =)

[nervousvenus]

GOD YES TYL Hibari/Yamamoto. I love this pairing.

You did a wonderful job, and I especially love the way you wrote Hibari -- he's just the right amount of mean and subtly kind. I like how uncertain and young Yamamoto is here, too. He is such an awkward teenager. It makes you want to see what will happen between him and the Hibari from his own time after this is all said and done.

The only concrit I have is that sometimes the punctuation is missing inside the quotation marks, but that's something that's easily fixed. :3

Thank you for writing this, it's lovely and I can't wait to see more from you! ♥

[kathy20121]

Thanks so much! Characterization always makes me nervous, so I'm really glad you liked it! =)

Concrit's always welcome, so thanks a lot for pointing that out! =)

You're welcome! ^^ thank you for leaving a comment! =)