Moonlight Monday 10-14-13

[katicalocke]

Author's Note: Yay, another chapter of Moonlight! By posting every two weeks, I think I have enough chapters left to see me through NaNoWriMo. There may be a lapse in December while I recover from NaNoing, but I hope not.
This chapter is a lot like the original version, except Izeri actually grows a backbone and makes an effort to start to tell

Comments

[mee_eep]

Awww I do like this version of Izeri more. Poor foolish thing, learning to care right at the point he needs to reveal what might ruin it.

[katicalocke]

Thanks! ^_^ I like this Izeri better, too. Yeah, the timing is a little cliche, but life is like that sometimes. Raising the stakes made him realize what he should have seen all along.

Thanks for the comment! ^_^

[nekoii_desu]

AAAAAAAAAARRRGGHHHHH!!!! This feels very much like a CLIFFHANGER!!!! Despite the fact that I HAVE read the next chapter. BUT! NOT THE REWRITTEN ONE!!! WHERE IZERI IS GONNNA TELL HIM ABOUT SHIVAL!!!
My breath is literally like, gasping , like EXCITEMENT OMG!! ANTICIPATION!! GWAAAAH! *flails*

Now I have to wait for the 28th.... ;_; meeeeeh~

ps: the whole 'love confessionsssss' feels real-er in this chapter. Maybe it just takes some getting used to, afterall, Izeri did take me by surprise by being honest with his FEELINGZZZZZ *ah the feels!*