Moonlight Monday 11-10-13 and Other Updates

[katicalocke]

Author's Note: Hello all! This is Katica Locke reporting from deep in the trenches of NaNoWriMo. We're just entering the uphill slog known as Week Two, where many a fledgeling novel has met an untimely end as writers start to run out of steam or lose track of their plot. I'll admit to facing my share of stumbles on this one, even resorting to

Comments

[mee_eep]

good luck with nano etc

I thought in last chapter Izeri was planning to tell Charias the truth but here he's planning to keep his secret as long as possible? Could be me getting distracted and missing a bit, I'll have to back read when I've more time.

[nekoii_desu]

faerie culture sure is interesting. They made eating seem like some dating ritual! XD
I love the TENSION in this chapter.... oooohhhh nice nice nice. This is the REAL morning after. It has good vibes, and good direction. Definately likeling it more if possible~

and urgh the NERVES and the TENSION! and the whole shuffling feet for Charias part, he's so antsy! as he should be, I can just imagine what's going through his head, as he hyper analyzes everything Izeri does from this point on. And Izeri himself, with getting lost in his thoughts and all, probably looks distracted.
And if they're not actively talking with each other, then it's gonna be a whole play of 'watching your body language' which is... very nice. Good . I'm liking the development, and looking forward to the confession!!! Good luck Izeri!

[akerushin]

Did Izeri always eat meat/animal products? Yah, I have the strangest hang-ups. Haha

I enjoy how observant (yet totally not) Izeri is. He notices but doesn't understand.