Assignment #4

[katmarfo]

Comments

[drag_her_down]

Really cute I like it! You made it short and quick too, that's nice, I'd be tempted to throw in more descriptions and stuff, but you didn't do that which is good. It made it a quick read. I like the metaphores you used a lot too.

[becomearockstar]

You are SUCH a good writer, Kat. I mean, the phrase "moldable destiny" is just perfect.