[Secret Santa Fanfic: Can We Keep Him? (4/4) Complete]

Dec 23, 2009 01:46

TITLE: Can We Keep Him? (4/4)
AUTHOR: katokatsu
RECIPIENT: sanna_lan
GENRE: Romance/Humor, AU
PAIRING(S): USxUK-centric with vague suggestions of GerIta and SuFin in previous chapters
WORD COUNT: 3,013
RATINGS/WARNINGS: PG-13 for Arthur's mouth and mentions of sex; FLUFF, so much fluff; Human names with the occasional nation-nickname (Iggy, etc.); Alfred being ( Read more... )

america, 2009 secret santa fic/art exchange, fanfic, england

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whenyoufalldown December 23 2009, 01:24:49 UTC
That was a great fic :D I especially liked the part when they compared Hero to Alfred and the revolutionary war.

Also, how Arthur is not quite ready to talk about the war yet, I think that fit really nicely instead of having them talk it out just yet.

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katokatsu January 5 2010, 21:47:44 UTC
Thank you so much for such a sweet comment!! ♥

I like to think that Arthur is being slowly healed by Alfred, rather than immediately. And that Alfred is patient enough to understand that Arthur isn't used to expressing himself with words. (the tsundere he is)

Thank you again for commenting!! ^___^

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starfoxx322 December 23 2009, 01:56:26 UTC
Eek, you had me going for a second, when Alfred was all like "Denial issues!" and Arthur was all "Well screw you, maybe!" and I was all "Nyoes, I wanna happy ending ;__;" But it all worked out okay. I liked the way you ended it, on a comfortable point, with a few things still left up to the reader. Great first time fic. =)

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katokatsu January 5 2010, 21:51:28 UTC
Haha!! I'm sorry to worry you! I could never write a sad ending, I'm too much of a fluff-addict. :D

Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment!! ♥

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bluubun December 23 2009, 02:20:01 UTC
....this whole ff

THE MOE KILLED ME ;///m////;!!!!!
it was very cute!good job > U < <3

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katokatsu January 5 2010, 21:52:37 UTC
XDD OH NOOOO!!! *revives with fluff*

Thank you so much, your comment is so sweet!!! ♥

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in0the0clouds December 23 2009, 05:38:43 UTC
Wow, I really, truely enjoyed this fic; every chapter! The fluff was oh so sweet, but my favorite part was how you wrote their relationship, angst and all! I think most USUK fans know that the relationship tends to be a bit on the disfunctional side, but it's sad when so many fics seem to go like this ( ... )

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katokatsu January 5 2010, 22:06:34 UTC
AGHSAJKD;LGDHSFA;JASF YOUR COMMENT.

SERIOUSLY. AHHHHHH. ♥♥♥

I've re-read your comment like a billion times, it's so wonderful, thank you so much!!!

AND I TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOUR SUMMARY OF USUAL USxUK FICS. XD "I will now run crying from the room in a very manly fashion" made me lmao XD

And afhgjs;fagkd YES. I love to think that Alfred helps Arthur gradually heal, because he understands Arthur enough to know that he isn't the kind of person that can just let go of things, nor is he someone who can really express how he feels out loud very well (he is a tsundere, after all.)

AND AHHHHHHH I'm so relieved that my characterization is all right!!!! And don't worry, I absolutely LOVE long comments, I can't tell you how much yours has brightened my day!! Thank you so much for your encouraging words, really!! ♥

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sephydark December 23 2009, 10:32:34 UTC
I feel kind of sad now that this fic is ending. It crept up on me too fast! I'm really glad that they worked out everything in the end; I was getting worried when Alfred started yelling at Arthur about how he wouldn't resolve his issues.

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katokatsu January 5 2010, 22:09:00 UTC
Ahh!! I totally know how you feel, I felt so sad that it was ending, I had such a great time writing it!

And don't worry, I can't bring myself to write a sad ending, I'm too much of a sucker for fluff! ^_^;

Thank you so much for commenting and following this fic!!! ♥♥

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