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katrinatoc

NaNo! Day 11

Nov 11, 2008 00:02

Xander was just about to watch some movies when his doorbell rang. Frowning at the door, he picked up a gun and went to answer when he decided to peek out the window. Biting back a squeal of joy, Xander flung the door open and let Tony and Abby in.

“Oh my God, when did you guys get in? I so would have picked ( Read more... )

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*pout* Why can't I write like this? serequat November 11 2008, 05:30:47 UTC

*sniffs* Okay... not allowed to cry... not allowed to cry... dagnabit, I'm crying anyway.

Very good - I really like this chapter; though the bit with Tony being chained to the serial killer, didn't he end up killing White?

And you know, I'm almost tempted to tell you that you should see about Xander kidnapping Tony to bring back to Ez and Vin for a foursome. *smirks* Maybe if my muses cooperate for a change... *glares at snooring bunnies in pen*

Re: *pout* Why can't I write like this? katrinatoc November 11 2008, 05:34:23 UTC

*blushes* I'm really glad you're enjoying it.... and yes, Tony did kill White, but he was still chained to the man..... Tony was in shock, so the ramifications weren't that clear at the time.

I don't think anyone ever looked at it from someone looking at Tony from the outside of his job. That's why Xander is so pissed off....

*sniffles* Yeah, I wanted to cry writing it too... but I held back, telling the bunny that I can't write if I'm blubbering like a baby.

*grins* Tony's gonna get some real good loving.... know of Joe and Levon? *cackles*

Re: *pout* Why can't I write like this? serequat November 11 2008, 05:43:27 UTC

Ah. It was the statement Abby made - "the perpetrator is in jail" - that made me wonder. Every time I see that ep I just want to cuddle Tony afterwards. (well, I want to cuddle Tony all the time, but that's beside the point)

And yes, I am familiar with them - if only from reading fanfics that have them in as a crossover. Or heck... you could always bag him a Mountie. He and Turnbull would make for an interesting pair. *smirk*

Re: *pout* Why can't I write like this? katrinatoc November 11 2008, 05:52:43 UTC

*nods* I can never remember if they told Abby that White was dead.... and it didn't help that Kate and Gibbs were bitching at him too.... *glares at both*

*smirks* I'd love to give Tony to the Mounties, but Chicago is too close to DC however, and besides.... Tony could do with the Cowboy and his cityboy partner... *cackles* If he went to Chicago, it'd be a foursome..... Tony/Turnbull/Fraser/Stan.... talk about nummy....

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nakeisha November 11 2008, 07:21:39 UTC

Duly clickety clicked.

Pretty eggs and hatchlings and dragons.

Weeeeeeeeee for you - that's a great word count.

*Waves pom poms*

katrinatoc November 11 2008, 07:25:08 UTC

*smiles* thank you! For both the kind reviews and the clicking!

*takes picture and keeps for inspiration* you know... a group of us were wondering what Tony would look like in a Dallas Cowboys Cheer leading outfit..... We think he'd look Hawt.... *drools and makes bunny happy with picture*

jack4will November 11 2008, 14:09:53 UTC

Now this was a great way to start my morning. *hugs and smooches*

*glares at Gibbs* Ooh.. Chris really needs to put Gibbs down and Kate. *hugs the Tony*

*snuggles Xan* Vin and Ez are going to have fun making sure that their Xan is all right. Damm Chris is going to be in protective drive now.. Same with Buck. Nate and JD are going to be really worried about him until they see him.

Looking forward to more of this.

katrinatoc November 11 2008, 15:11:00 UTC

*grins* you'll just have to wait! *cackles*

but yes, there will be much cuddling and protecting going on when they meet again..... *dances*

jack4will November 11 2008, 15:54:14 UTC

Awww... come on give me a hint to warm me up.. *hates cold weather, especially when we have no heating oil*

Oh yeah they would. Xan is theirs, Team 7 will never let Xan go.

katrinatoc November 11 2008, 16:04:38 UTC

The introduction was boring, but gave Xander a chance to scope out who was who and from where. He mentally pouted that he wasn’t sitting with Ezra, Vin and the others, and winced at the obvious tension between the NCIS agents that were present. If this was an intern hunt, Gibbs would scare them all off and prevent them from getting anyone. As it was, it was bad enough that Tony and Abby was quiet, and it looked like Kate was poking at things better left unsaid ( ... )

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