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katrushkalupin

Chapter 2

Apr 05, 2010 23:18

Chapter 2

Guy awoke with the sun. Even as he pushed himself up and out of the bed he knew that everything was different. A glanced to his left showed that Marian was no longer beside him. He remembered her tears the night before, the way that she had curled into herself away from his touch. He had not hurt her. He knew that he had not. She ( Read more... )

romance, katrushkalupin, fanfic, robinhoodbbc, nc-17, au, guy/ marian, what time has told

Comments 16

perteltote April 7 2010, 17:50:32 UTC

nice chapter -- good follow to the first, I was a little bit worried that this would be one of those fics where once Marian experienced the awesomeness that is Guy her brain would melt, but it looks like she's as stubborn and hateful to him as ever....poor Guy! lol Plus I can't believe she is still kissing Robin behind his back...looking forward to whatever happens next!

louiseab April 12 2010, 12:11:14 UTC

Thank you for Chapter 2. I'm really looking forward to the next installment and anticipating that there might be a few more chapters to go!

idiot17 April 15 2010, 06:35:50 UTC

I'm still with you! Look forward to the next update. If you're a student, I realize this is crunch time, but please don't leave us hanging too long. LOL!

01cheers April 23 2010, 11:03:57 UTC

I saw this when you posted but was super busy. Just wanted to say that I too am still following, and like it. The only comment I'd make is that there seems to be a bit of a leap between the end of the first chapter and this one - I'd expect there to be even more awkwardness and bitterness after the first night, and while there is some, things seem to be almost going too smoothly. Still, well done.

katrushkalupin April 23 2010, 12:13:53 UTC

Well, i can fix that... *cackles evilly* Nah they will be having marital issues for quite sometime. But i was afraid of Marian seeming too bitter. However if you find her to be too mild i will certainly take that into consideration. Thanks for sticking with me though, i understand being busy, I have a ten page paper due monday and a week of studying and finals. Oh for the summer!!!

01cheers May 2 2010, 06:23:52 UTC

OH petal I just found this by accident, you posted the first part on lordgisborne didn't you? I loved it, then it seemed to disappear! or maybe that's just me? I am quite inept at this stuff!!! I really like this,I think they play out well, it's great that she 'isn't overwhelmed by the awesomeness that is Gisborne' as I think someone said earlier. She's strong by still a bit very young, you've got her a lot more interesting that some do! keep it up sweetie. Now I know where to look, I will have more of it!
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