Fic: Beauty in the Breakdown

[katsfic]

Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Author: kathrynthegr8
Fandom: NFL RPS
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Peyton Manning/Eli Manning
Warnings: Incest, Sex, Language
Word count: 1440
Disclaimer: This never happened.
A/N: A very big, sloppy thank you to eeyore9990. More detailed author's note after the fic.

Comments

[bellonablack]

Okay I read it.

and Okay.

I loved it. :3 Hot stuff, very intimate, sensual, and natural, even with the context.

[kathrynthegr8]

Your comment means so much to me because I know you read this off my f-list. Thank you for giving it a chance! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)

[du_secondaire]

Ok, so lemmesaythis.

I'm currently writing Eli porn myself.

You have totally upstaged me tenfold.

Amazingly, jaw-droppingly hot. You, madam, win Internets.

[kathrynthegr8]

Yay, internets! I've never won them before, they look delish.

Thank you for commenting! I'm happy you liked it.

[ruefull]

Gah.
Totally hot. Totally well-written. Totally melted my brain.

[kathrynthegr8]

Thank you so much! Your comment totally made my day. Glad you liked it.

[frequency_lost]

This literally made my day. Manning!cest is my favorite and there is not enough of it at all.

Thank you SO Much. <3

[kathrynthegr8]

Thank you for commenting. Happy you enjoyed it and I agree, there needs to be more Manningcest! ;)

[redblack32]

God, this was wonderful, and so hot. Loved the reason why there are soap dispensers in the locker room:)

I don't know if Peyton talked with Austin Collie's wife after the hit, but that's the first thing that came to mind when the camera cut to him talking to someone on the phone while on the sidelines.

I thought the same thing! Love reading something like this after watching the game and seeing references to stuff I noticed!

Great story.

[kathrynthegr8]

Loved the reason why there are soap dispensers in the locker room

Yeah, me and my beta had a laugh trying to figure out the lube situation! Thank you for commenting. Glad you liked it!