Her eyes are gray, Not blue.

[katspoems]

Comments

[raspy_]

I think this is my favourite from all the ones you've posted so far.

[katspoems]

well thankies!
^^

[quiet_thoughts]

NOW. HERE is what I have been blathering on about with the title thing!!! VERY NICE.

Once again I love this. The "she's dead" line is really cool. Used in lots of poems, but it never fails to be effective. And in this context, it's really kinda like, it jumps out and you go "whoa what" and then you get it.

[nartfcoel]

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