Very interesting idea here. It's.... I dunno, if you're like me and quickly find love in pity, you picture a guy who can't control himself or is overcome by some weird force of anger or something, and then realizes what he's done and is repenting, and you really pity him and give a mental "awwww, poor muffin!" But then you also like the person narrating the poem, you also pity her and are rooting for her. So it's a sad poem. Very interesting, though, I like it.
In the "Why" stanza, was it meant to rhyme? Because it kinda does, and it's just spiffily. :D I love it when stuff just accidentally rhymes. It's like a sign that it's right or was meant to be. XD
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In the "Why" stanza, was it meant to rhyme? Because it kinda does, and it's just spiffily. :D I love it when stuff just accidentally rhymes. It's like a sign that it's right or was meant to be. XD
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