(sorry I haven't really been reading your poems, but I am now!) I dunno, if you want a critique or not, but, well, I honestly can't help myself, sooo...
Me likes. :D I like the jolting, jarring sort of images, they just kinda flash in the mind and transfer to one another. Kinda like a CSI flashback except different. XD The repetition of "bloody fingers" is a very effective....imagry tool, sorry, can't think of proper wording at the moment, heh. Anyways, really neat. I have always been a big fan of this style of poetry. When it's done well, it is just about the most awesome, stimulating thing to read. You did a pretty decent job, m'dear.
I'm sorry, if this was just meant as emotional release and stuff, but it's cool. ^_^;
I also really like it when the title isn't something said in the poem, but gives the whole poem a new meaning, or explains it or something of the sort. SO yeah, coolness there.
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I dunno, if you want a critique or not, but, well, I honestly can't help myself, sooo...
Me likes. :D I like the jolting, jarring sort of images, they just kinda flash in the mind and transfer to one another. Kinda like a CSI flashback except different. XD The repetition of "bloody fingers" is a very effective....imagry tool, sorry, can't think of proper wording at the moment, heh.
Anyways, really neat. I have always been a big fan of this style of poetry. When it's done well, it is just about the most awesome, stimulating thing to read. You did a pretty decent job, m'dear.
I'm sorry, if this was just meant as emotional release and stuff, but it's cool. ^_^;
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I also really like it when the title isn't something said in the poem, but gives the whole poem a new meaning, or explains it or something of the sort. SO yeah, coolness there.
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