What is a Kiss?

[katspoems]

Comments

[quiet_thoughts]

Yay! I really like this one! The repeated idea of promises, and how the kissing thing slowly gets more and more, er, violent, shall we say.
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I'm sorry, my critique brain has shriveled. Too much critiquing. :P
This one just gives me a really happy feeling, I really love it. Awesomely spiffily. :D