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OMG: Oh My Genie! (Chapter 9/?)

Apr 06, 2011 00:23

Title: "OMG: Oh My Genie!"
Author: Jes/Katsu-chan/katsujin06
Pairing: Aiba x OC
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Fantasy, Drama, Comedy
Disclaimer: I do not own any of Arashii. Just the plot and original characters. =)
Summary: Aiba Masaki plays the role of a magical genie. His master, Shirayuki Rei found him and kept him. Three wishes. Of course, as a genie, ( Read more... )

fic: oh my genie, *ma-kun

Comments 9

andreja1989 April 5 2011, 16:39:35 UTC

Uwah~ saw it between my classes so wait to come home to read it, maybe even sooner xD but I read what you said at the beginning and I would like you to concentrate on the romance (haha my favorite genre xDDD).
I will comment more when I read it :)

katsu_chan06 April 5 2011, 16:43:14 UTC

Haha. It's 12:42 AM right now. XD
It just means that I need to sleep now. I will continue reading yours tomorrow.... i mean later. XD But I got to see some spoilers about it. Sakura and Aiba!?! XD

katsu_chan06 April 5 2011, 16:44:36 UTC

I forgot to say this:

Then I'll concentrate more on romance. XD

andreja1989 April 5 2011, 16:46:04 UTC

haha go to sleep then, I'm still at uni o.O
yeah you saw some spoilers but... I hope you will not be mad at me because of the story, some are :))) but are still content with it xDDD and want to read more xD uwah~

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atenea005 April 5 2011, 17:21:33 UTC

She doesn't undestend or maybe She doesn't want to understand!! poor Aiba!! he loves her....thank you for update! I like it! jane!!

tensaibaka April 5 2011, 17:23:34 UTC

wo~ long chapter~ funny at the last part!! haha! They totally forget about their food!

Well,i think it would be better to plan first before starting your next chapter~ Maybe you can focus more on romance and lesser plot in the next chapter and then for the following would be plot with lesser romance~

As for me, i wish to see both moving together~

sakuraisha_251 April 6 2011, 01:16:13 UTC

Haha.. Funny argument! I wonder why Rei was being unreasonable here, while Aiba had confessed to her soo many times before. Poor Aiba! XD

I don't know much about writing, but maybe you can focus on plot first, then you can add in some romance part. :)
Thanks 4 sharing~!

fancyann1974 April 7 2011, 16:39:00 UTC

aaahhh i am so late ***so so so sorry***
loved this chapter, what is erika hiding, why does she hate sayuri and want to kill her, who is giving the orders.
lol...love rei tring to teach aiba to cook, why cant she understand that aiba is talking about her
i agree with mwar they are acting like idots :)
cant wait to see what happens next
thank you so much for sharing :):):)***hugs***