rewrite of Above the Clouds: Table of Cebes

[kattullus]

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[mylifeismundane]

this one's pretty damn awesome, i must say

[kattullus]

thank you

I was happy with it before, but I knew it wasn't quite right, it looked too messy, but now that I've clarified the line it's a lot better

it makes me happy to know that I wouldn't have been able to create the poem in this way three months ago, but now I can, which gives me a very measurable sense of accomplishment