Congratulations on the win--very much deserved! I loved the different pov's. The Dursley's are EVIL--that section made me all teary-eyed. I LOLed at Teddy as the ring bearer--too cute! Brilliant story! :D
The Dursley's are evil, aren't they? I hope after DH, Dudley took a good long look at himself and realized he didn't like what he saw and made a concerted effort to change, but Vernon and Petunia were beyond hope.
I figured he'd have to be a little clumsy, being Tonks' son.
Congrats, Kathy! I loved your take on the POVs from the very beginning.
Gideon and Fabian have a special place in my fandom heart but I honestly can't decide on a favourite passage, their past, their present and their future were all fabulously narrated.
This was originally going to be six separate parts, but I decided I didn't want to show them apart (even though they were, technically, in the Present).
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I'm glad you liked it.
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The Dursley's are evil, aren't they? I hope after DH, Dudley took a good long look at himself and realized he didn't like what he saw and made a concerted effort to change, but Vernon and Petunia were beyond hope.
I figured he'd have to be a little clumsy, being Tonks' son.
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Gideon and Fabian have a special place in my fandom heart but I honestly can't decide on a favourite passage, their past, their present and their future were all fabulously narrated.
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Congrats on winning! You deserved it :D
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This was originally going to be six separate parts, but I decided I didn't want to show them apart (even though they were, technically, in the Present).
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