Bonus Day 4 haiku

Apr 04, 2011 23:32

On this warm spring night
Allowing a single tear
I lay down my mask

Reaching and spreading my wings
I yearn for the warm spring air
To grant me freedom

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sandathea April 6 2011, 04:43:13 UTC
Wow... you inspired me!

Sweet sad Orpheus,
Looking back at your lost love,
Was she ever there?

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kawaii_gaara April 6 2011, 05:40:00 UTC
Excellent~ XDDD <33 And beautifully done~<3333 Do moooore~<3333

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ruo_fidelis April 7 2011, 03:16:21 UTC
An excellent pair of haiku that work well individually as well as coupled. Honestly I think this is a pretty close expression of the way that I've felt the last few days; amazing done love.

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kawaii_gaara April 7 2011, 03:47:50 UTC
Aww thank you. Sorry to hear that you've felt this way too but yeah... I can't express it any other way but through this haiku. We'll get our freedom soon. Let us strive~<333 /big hugs

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