I take full and utter responsibility for you writting these. XD
Both of them are very elegantly worded with well chosen phrases and images, as you said not vulgar but still very vivid. I especially enjoy the twist at the end of the second, well done~
Yeah it was really tough trying to get words to rhyme but I think I got the image I wanted ppl to see while reading it. And LOL I'm glad you did~ XDDDD <33333 It kind of ended up that way to be honest, but I thought it was funny and cute so I left it~
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Both of them are very elegantly worded with well chosen phrases and images, as you said not vulgar but still very vivid. I especially enjoy the twist at the end of the second, well done~
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Yeah it was really tough trying to get words to rhyme but I think I got the image I wanted ppl to see while reading it. And LOL I'm glad you did~ XDDDD <33333 It kind of ended up that way to be honest, but I thought it was funny and cute so I left it~
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