Day 8 poetry~!!

[kawaii_gaara]

I am.... actually really proud of this one~ XDDD;;; As corny as it may sound, I accomplished a fib form!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAY~! And used Emi's prompt with inanimate object~ =^W^= <3333 Hope you enjoy~<33

Comments

[ruo_fidelis]

It's a form based off of the Fibonacci sequence; 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,. . . Where numbers in the sequence are the sum of the previous two. For the poem the syllable count for each line follows this pattern, being reset anytime that there is a stanza break.

For example:
Stanza One:
Line 01 | 1 syllable
Line 02 | 1 syllable
Line 03 | 2 syllables
Line 04 | 3 Syllables
Line 05 | 5 syllables
(and so on)

Stanza two: (reset)
Line 01 | 1 syllable

[kawaii_gaara]

Yeah what Sus says~ I'm really glad he explained it to you cuz I know I would have messed it up~ XDDDD;;;;;; But it's an interesting form!

[ruo_fidelis]

A very nostalgic and comforting poem, much like the blanket that it encompasses. While sadly I didn't have anything like that, this is a very heart touching poem love, and you did an excellent job with the form and getting the lines to flow smoothly.

You should be proud of everything you write, but yes you should be especiallly proud of this one. I really loved it.

[kawaii_gaara]

Yaaaay~<333 Yep yep! It's a blanket~ =>W<= <333333333 I think that's why I enjoyed writing it because I've never had one myself but always hear stories of ppl holding onto one for a very long time. It was actually accidentally prompted by a friend one day~ XDDDDD When she was talking about her blanket and I was like awwwwwwwww that sounds sooo nice~ write write write~ lolol

Thank youuuu soo much~ =>W<= <333333333 I'm really glad you think so because I have to say it was a challenge. And awwwww I most certainly am and if not, I do try to change it until I could be proud of it~<3333