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May 08, 2009 00:51

Hey I managed to write two of the drabbles that I was dared to write from this post.

They're both from Chrno Crusade with possible spoilers involved so if you plan on reading it then, I'm sorry. As much as it pains me to say this, I'd avoid reading my drabbles -TTWTT-

I haven't forgotten about the drabble I still owe you, ladynathena, so don't worry~ ->W<- ( Read more... )

tomodachi, chrno crusade, kinchou, drabble

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glitteringloke May 8 2009, 13:46:52 UTC
♥♥ i emailed you my thoughts ^_^ *plots to start making you a sexy aion coat so i can resurrect my fi*

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kawaii_gaara May 8 2009, 19:56:48 UTC
Yup! Got them and will make the changes~<3333 Thank you so much!! OMG YES PLZ.. OTL

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haleysings May 8 2009, 21:39:58 UTC
Oooh, these were both really good! <3 Aion/Fiore is still a little bit creepy to me, but the reasoning behind the scene made sense. My only critique on it is I think the word "humane" isn't quite what you're looking for--that means something more along of compassion and sympathy for other people and animals. Fiore might have that, but it doesn't make much sense in the context it's in. I can't figure out a word that means exactly what you're looking for..."aware", maybe? Cognizant ( ... )

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kawaii_gaara May 10 2009, 08:27:37 UTC
Thank you so much! lolol yea, they would be a weird pair but I don't know... something about those two I like a lot ->W<-;;;; Oh God a kink!? LOLOL aa I see yea I think I was trying to be overly fancy with it~ ->W<-;;;; I just meant human OTL so yea I'll change that to human instead~ -TTWTT-;;;

Yeaaaaaaaaaaa I'm sooo sorry I could only think of sad ones -TTWTT-;;;; I'll have to think of a happy one for them then but that scene was the only thing I could think of at the moment~ -TTWTT-;;; And yep~ that's what I was going for~<333 I wasn't sure if Chrno was too emotional there but yeaaa~ ->W<-;;;

Yea, I came to realize that quite a bit doing this piece. Like I said, I always like to challenge myself and try managing it so it's a bit more mysterious not even sure if that's what I was aiming for~ ->W<-;;;; but errrr... I'll try and use their name instead more especially if I'm not using a vague scene and I want ppl guessing it~ ->W<-;;; I'll add the names before posting it on DA~<3333 ( ... )

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haleysings May 10 2009, 08:44:08 UTC
XD I think I almost like it, too, but at the same time it's...creepy. I'm torn. LOL, what sort of kink would that be? Mind control? Or just a think for emotionless girls? Oooh, I gotcha. Yeah, fancy words are good, but you gotta make sure the meaning is the right one you're looking for. Using a dictionary is good for that (I checked humane in the dictionary before commenting, actually)--dictionary.com works just fine and is free, so yeah ( ... )

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kawaii_gaara May 10 2009, 08:53:18 UTC
M-Master and slave type kink? *SHOT* ->x<-;;; Hm hm yea, I'm usually pretty good with that but alas it has gotten to me~ Lack of sleep didn't help either~ I couldn't sleep cuz all these ideas were floating in my mind and I had to get it all down before I forget them~ -@w@-;;;; lolol My creativity drive is weird~ But Yusss I totally agree!

*phew* I'm glad to hear that~ -TTWTT- and Yea, I've been giving it a thought too. Not sure from where I'd want to take him but it's been crossing my mind too lately. We need a good curse to reveal ittttttttttt~<3333333333

Yea definitely, I added their names in certain spots so it's not too "Chrno did this. and Aion did that." but I think enough to help the reader know who's who? And I actually purposefully separated the paragraphs so that the first part is Aion and the second part is Chrno~ sooo hopefully with those patterns and the added names it's a little more clearer than before~<333 If you're interested in what changes I made here you go~<33 LOL That's awesome!

Not at all~<

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