Comments | kawaii_musouka: I FINISHED! XD

kawaii_musouka

I FINISHED! XD

Jun 11, 2005 12:12

Yep yep at this current moment I finished my first manga page *jumps up and down happy* Who wouldn't be happy to finish their "first"? XD; Alright so I think I probably overtoned the page (I suck at toning) and so from now on I hope to continue to get better at it. Maybe at that time I'll have ComicWorks to help out in giving me 200+ tones to ( Read more... )

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anonymous June 12 2005, 06:05:42 UTC

I'll take a picture of that bus for you ^_^ Thuy here! I just took a look at your manga art page and i think its done very well! very nice job and i totally see the bloodiness that is going on, i wonder if that will continue or will it not? Well the end product after you suffered through everything i think turned out really. Hello mother, hello father, these mosquitos really bother, kanine advantage really stopped these biting, They're not biting, i'm not itching, i can do whatever i want, thanks to you for sending me canine advantage!

Ok i'm weird, but i wanted to sing a song to celebrate your first page. You should keep putting up more pages for mouth waterers :)

kawaii_musouka June 12 2005, 16:35:32 UTC

o.o Oh thx, though I did mention it won't be bloody anymore until like 100 pages into the story or something. LOL I love that commercial XD; that puppy is SO cute ... *coughs* Thanks Thuy ^^ you still owe me the other pictures of "the wall".

Looks great ^_^ anonymous June 16 2005, 19:18:43 UTC

Congratulations on your graduation and your finishing of your first manga page. I think it looks magnificent with the great toning that you did. The knife in the first panel looks very well done and you contrasted it well with the non tones on the character in the 2nd panel. Readers will certainlly understand that the emphasis is on that character losing someone that he knows through the stabbing of that person and that he is really scared out of his wits due to what is happening right in front of him. What a violent start to your manga and I think it will be very good, can't wait to see what you have to up next on your next few pages. How long exactly did it take you to do that page. Remember Photoshop is a great tool!

Re: Looks great ^_^ kawaii_musouka June 16 2005, 22:21:27 UTC

Thanks the graduation is today actually XD; Thx o_o you interpreted the page very well o_O I thought I made it slightly vague, but it's good you got it XD Page 2 I hope will look pretty, lots more detail than page 1 that's for sure, it definitely shames the 4th panel of that page. Though shrinking it down to downloadable size might lower the quality quite a bit. Took about 3-4 hours to draw page one, and more than a day to Ink it and Tone. Hai PS is great!