Page 2 is up! XD

Jun 19, 2005 23:43

YAY!!! *runs around happy* Page 2 is up now XD I've actually been holding it for a day cause I wanted to make the schedule update consistent since I like "keeping my word" for once >_<; It's my best page I think XD I love the 4th panel, worked so hard on it, grew to love drawing trees even if it's not great ^^ It was a GREAT learning experience ( Read more... )

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anonymous June 21 2005, 16:50:04 UTC
You did such a great job on the trees, i like the realistic look that you provided with the tones, it seems that you worked really hard on them and it did pay off. The entire page looks great. The mountains look really nice and I like the effect with the birds. Sai character is such a great cutie!! SO you are right about the goodlooking.

Keep the good work coming! I will see what your page three looks like i can't wait!. Bushes are the pain i guess..good luck :)

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kawaii_musouka June 21 2005, 20:24:10 UTC
Thanks a lot XD LOL Sai o_O has some fangirls I think already ... >_< I hate bushes ... or shrubs, w/e they are. All I know is that they're evil, EVIL! *dies*

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anonymous June 22 2005, 21:23:48 UTC
First I would like to say that I know you worked really hard on this webcomic page because the desired effects came out well in that the forest path looks really like a forest path and the character looks really SEXY! Yes i do mean this. The mountains also look really good and its a great landscaping scene.

Although I do feel that you can bring out an even greater effect through the use of darker tones and also if you look at the character carefully you will notice that the proportions between him and the background seem a bit off, so the trees are really puny when instead i feel that you want a towering look for the forest.

All in All this is a really great work of a manga page and it would fit in professional published books so keep up the drawing and toning roxie! From looking at this page, one would argue you could be a pro.

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kawaii_musouka June 22 2005, 22:18:04 UTC
Thanks a lot. Yeah I did try to make it darker but iono it came out awkward, I hope to do better someday. Hai I got a critique about the tree thing also so thanks I'll try to fix the perspective and such for future backgrounds. Well the thign was I didn't even know what I wanted the forest to look like. I was just happy that it came out pretty well for my first try so I never considered if it look realistically possible at that angle. Which would explain why when I look at the picture I felt something felt off but I couldn't figure it out at the time. Thx again.

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