Comments | kawaii_to_kowai: Native English Speakers Please HALP

kawaii_to_kowai

Dec 14, 2009 00:18

Can you tell me if this sentence is correct?

"She didn't so much as breath once she heard the voice."

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tink_queen December 14 2009, 13:44:09 UTC

I think it should be breathe with an 'e' at the end.

kawaii_to_kowai December 14 2009, 22:08:55 UTC

oh my bad typo lol but otherwise its ok?

tink_queen December 15 2009, 13:02:22 UTC

It feels OK...but then my english grammar isn't alWays to be trusted, as far too many times I've ended a sentence...with a preposition! o__O (OMG)

kawaii_to_kowai December 16 2009, 00:20:48 UTC

haha why must english be so complicated D: yet people call it easy lol

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kawaii_to_kowai December 14 2009, 22:11:34 UTC

oh ok thank you! ^^

astr0sexy December 14 2009, 22:56:39 UTC

it makes sense but it sounds wordy and awkward. maybe

once she heard the voice, she did not dare muster a breath.

kawaii_to_kowai December 15 2009, 00:05:23 UTC

ooooo, that sounds nice! thanks for your advice!