Empty Apartment

[kawaiikes]

Because I am in PLC, bored, and Subeta is error-ing me non-stop, I decided to write a mini-fic. It took me about an hour, but I am strangely satisfied with it. Feedback would be really, really good. Heh. I want to know if it deserves to exist...XD;

No, it is not disturbing shoujo-ai. It's friends. Being friends.

Comments

[kep_trefler]

Nice.

[___sorryofficer]

I actually really like it, because it seems realistic in sense of the actual Chobits manga. Or something.

I mean, there's a few comma splicesmathingers but other than that I think it should be stuck in zee world's faces and be all, "LIKEE HOLLLAYY SHAATTEEEE, LOOK WUT DA KEZX0R ROBOT WROTEE. AIIEEEEE."

Except, maybe... Not the last part. Cuz, you know, people discriminate against robot peoples and stuff.