There’s no internet here

Aug 23, 2005 23:48

There’s no internet here. Right now I’m using my dad’s laptop to type this up. I keep getting paranoid he’ll see it, but then I remember that I have my own account. Of course, because he’s an administrator, he could EASILY look into my files, but I don’t think he’s technologically educated enough to know how to do or even that he can do that. XP ( Read more... )

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c0nt4m1n4t3d August 25 2005, 20:29:48 UTC
"Everything looks so amazing-the mountains towering high into the sky, dotted with trees in rows of dark and darker green; the pinkened clouds as they caress the orange sun as it bleeds its way slowly beneath the hills."

"I can see myself taking him out onto the balcony, and smelling the cold air together, filling our nostrils with the fresh, almost mint smell of the mountains that look so close you could just reach out and pull off a tree."

You're an amazing writer.

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kawaiikes August 25 2005, 21:25:52 UTC
Thank you! I try.

Sometimes I think my writing can be a little too flowery. Hopefully it's just me. XD

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unsane_kun August 26 2005, 14:49:21 UTC
Yeah the imagery in your writing surpasses the writing of most proffesional writers I've read, your writing vs mine, for example, would be like (::steals from her entry::)the mountains towering high into the sky, dotted with trees in rows of dark and darker green vs my writing (yes you're allowed to laugh) The dirt-trodden mountains lined with pines of varying green hues. So yeah, you've got me beat. <3

~~~Steve

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