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kawaiiribbom

I Want to Write a Love Story [One-shot]

Dec 01, 2011 05:45

Title: I Want to Write a Love Story
Pairing: KyuMin
Rating: NC-17
Summary: College students Sungmin and Kyuhyun are forced into numerous circumstances that lead them away the hate they share for one another, until there's simply no hate at all.

( I’ll sculpt its meaning and proverbial secrets by my hands of prose and syntax, leaving you to open the doors of its true impact. )

kyuhyun, sungmin, one-shot, pairing: kyumin

Comments 29

hit0rigurashi December 1 2011, 14:05:41 UTC

gotcha!!!! you're the writer of Sexuality, It's ridiculous, right?
where's the next chapter?!!!!!

*off to read this one :)

kawaiiribbom December 2 2011, 02:08:00 UTC

Haha, yeah that's me. I'm not really too sure when I'll be posting the next chapter, I'm sort of stuck right now =\ I'm torn between just rewriting the whole thing or putting it on an indefinite hiatus because it's not going the way I want it to at all OTL
Anyways, thank you for reading ^^

miraff December 1 2011, 15:59:27 UTC

damn!!! this fucking effing good!!!! i love this~!!! hug you tight!

kawaiiribbom December 2 2011, 02:08:48 UTC

Aw, thank you so much, that's very sweet of you! /huggles <3

dillon45 December 1 2011, 19:10:52 UTC

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! i love the hate/lust/hatejustnotasmuch/sex relationship they got going. amazing job!

kawaiiribbom December 2 2011, 02:09:32 UTC

I love love/hate relationships as well, haha. Thank you so much, and thanks for reading! :D

kyumin86eunhae December 1 2011, 20:46:01 UTC

So since I'm only registered as the 16-year old girl I am, I have to leave this as an anonymous comments here.. -.- I would love to make it under my LJ name though in case that you reply because I just have to say that your writing style is such a win!
It inspires me so much that I decided to write that angst I've been struggling with for quite a while now. I was afraid writing it but after reading this fic, especially the first half, I decided to write it. Once again, your writing style is great. It avokes certain fluffy, rose red and violet feelings in me <3
Oh, so you know who laft a comment on that awesome fic: kyumin86eunhae^^

PS: OMG THE SMUT WAS JUST AS AWESOME. O__O I wish I could write a smut like that >.<

kyumin86eunhae December 1 2011, 20:49:22 UTC

It kinda still worked? o.O Well then, even better xD

kawaiiribbom December 2 2011, 02:12:07 UTC

Haha, yeah, it did work! :D
Oh my gosh, really? Wow, that's really flattering for you to say that I inspired you, considering I'm always the one to be inspired. That's seriously makes me so happy ;A; Thank you for your lovely comment, and thank you for reading! <3

kyumin86eunhae December 2 2011, 21:16:36 UTC

Really! I was unsure, especially because my lack of writing skills and fail english since angst is really, really difficult to write... But after reading your first paragraph, I somehow had an idea how to start it that's why I began writing it^^ I'm gonna mention you in the A/N for inspiring me :D
I read everything with the rating NC-17 and comment on everything I read but I don't always tell them that they inspire me that much ;)
I always need a really hard push before writing angst... that's why that genre is really rare in my writings LOL

mypinksuperman December 1 2011, 22:53:01 UTC

one of the best love stories. :))

thanks to Hae for organizing a party and for letting KyuMin do the dare.. :P
i love how their love progresses. and still snarky at the end. LOL
"the more u hate the more you love applies to them.. HAHA!

kawaiiribbom December 2 2011, 02:14:34 UTC

best? omg no, there are so many people who are better writers than me >///<
Haha, of course, Donghae is being the little instigator that he is xD
Of course snarky, I'm all for the love/hate relationships ;)
That quote is relevant!
Thank you for reading <3