Comments | kaybee38: Ortus 2.2/? (Ignis sidestory)

kaybee38

Ortus 2.2/? (Ignis sidestory)

Feb 28, 2011 23:41

Title: Ortus/Chapter 2.2 - "Disturbed" Pt.2
Author: kaybee38
Rating: PG
Characters: Minho (and a bunch of other people, pay attention!)
Genre: reailty-based fantasy, sci-fi
Disclaimer: SHINee, f(x), DBSK, and S.M. the Ballad are owned by SM Entertainment only. Big Bang is owned by YG Entertainment. BEAST is owned by Cube Entertainment.
Summary: This is ( Read more... )

kaybee38, micky, !fic:ortus, seungri, yoochun, minho, sci-fi, yuri, changmin, yoseob, !fic: ignis

Comments 26

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:47:26 UTC

spot foraddicterated

addicterated March 1 2011, 09:23:04 UTC

omg! I fell asleep way early - long day - and I wake up cause it's freezing in my house and omg, there is fic and it is so awesome and omg!

\o/ this is me...and also this \o\ and this /o/ only much much faster than I can type it cause this is so awesome.

Wee Minho is so precious!

Changmin! Baby Jino! Yuri! Somehow I am super amused at Yoochun being the bad guy!

I can't stop exclaiming!

“Can’t you see? It’s too hot!” Minho snapped at them, while grabbing another small bowl of porridge off of the rolling cart of a passing nurse. Minho carefully spooned a little porridge and blew on it cooling it down. The boy, who couldn’t have been more than 10 years old, watched Minho intently, as he blew across the spoon again and ate some of the porridge himself.

Awww....I just...Awww.. My favoritest part I think.

You are good job Unnie! <3

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 15:39:20 UTC

Isn't wittle Minho adorbs? I'm really glad you liked it! but..Micky's actually a good guy. Yes, he sent Seungri to his room with no breakfast, but that's cuz he slapped Minho! But I went back and added a few lines in the section with him calling Changmin to make it more clear. He calls Changmin to get Minho out cuz he knows what the ebil doctor is up too. The kids save him first though.

addicterated March 2 2011, 00:03:08 UTC

aww yeah, okay i did get confused, silly me...well yay for Micky being a good guy then :D

this was truly fab, i've read it over and over and it's still fab. :)

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:47:45 UTC

spot forkim_ri

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:48:23 UTC

spot forixjaydee

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:49:00 UTC

spot for ellie_eunnie

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 05:04:41 UTC

extra spot for whoever wants it!

ontaejongminkey March 1 2011, 06:53:24 UTC

I want it! Yay~Excellent update as always :) I love Yoseob and Jino in this so cute! *squeals* Thanks for updating^^, and now, imma wait for Ignis <3

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 15:43:49 UTC

wow thanks so much for reading and the compliments! Yeees. Hopefully I'll have time to edit Ignis tonight. Thanks for commenting!