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kaybee38

Ignis 23/ ?

Apr 12, 2011 08:34

Title: Ignis/Chapter 23 - "Time Travel Pt.2"
Author: kaybee38
Rating: PG-15 (character death)
Word count: 2495
Pairings: friendship!Jonghyun/Onew, Minho/Onew, Taemin/Sulli, eventual!JongKey, broken!Minho/Yuri
Genre: fantasy, sci-fi
Disclaimer: SHINee, Super Junior, DBSK and f(x) are owned by SM Entertainment only
Summary: Teneo are humans that live among ( Read more... )

pairing: minho/onew, #shinee, pairing: taemin/sulli, #rating: pg-15, friendship!jongyu, broken!minho/yuri, eventual!jongkey, !fic: ignis

Comments 30

kaybee38 April 12 2011, 13:21:47 UTC

spot for ellie_eunnie

kaybee38 April 12 2011, 13:22:04 UTC

spot for stjoan4eva

stjoan4eva April 12 2011, 22:26:42 UTC

Gave this a read, crying now, have to run out the door so will come back, but I have to go wash my face and get rid of the puffyness...

Tina is shaking her head at me because I sobbed through this whole thing. I think I have to change my shirt now too...

fantastic, it was a rollarcoaster,true,but you invoked so much...my heart is inmy throat...

I'll give you a better comment than this later,with gold star lines, when I get home

kaybee38 April 13 2011, 04:54:22 UTC

I'm so sorry hunny! *runs over with tissues for you and headphones for Tina*
I'm glad that it touched you though, and thank you SO MUCH for helping me flesh out this idea so many weeks ago. The fact that you like it proves I did it justice. *takes gold star and plays with it *

kaybee38 April 12 2011, 13:22:42 UTC

spot for kinnosuikazura

kyttenfae April 12 2011, 21:18:48 UTC

Woaaaaaaah!!! *flailing* GAH! Seriously Unnie! Rollercoaster of emotions here! You have the sweet, funny moments like Onew being all, "Moooommmmm" over Minho, and you have the O___O moments like Siwon coming in and Narsha going into her vision-state, and then you have utter heartbreak with Onew losing his mom. And just, wow. *flails* <33333333333333333333333333

kaybee38 April 13 2011, 04:57:01 UTC

Thank you Jenn! I'm so glad you liked it since you and Tiff were the ones to help me with your prompts a few weeks ago! I'm glad that this part worked for you and thank you for commenting and friending me on DW! *hugs*

kaybee38 April 12 2011, 13:23:01 UTC

spot formoonstarchild

kaybee38 April 12 2011, 13:23:17 UTC

spot foraddicterated

addicterated April 13 2011, 10:51:21 UTC

I cried a bit reading this, don't even know where to start really with all the goodness in here. You really packed so much in here, I'm sincerely amazed. I think my favorite bits were the typical Mother/Son moment over Minho, the conversation about Kibum and how Jonghyun is the key.

I felt so bad for everyone, especially Onew and his Mom. :( Was a great chapter in every way.

kaybee38 April 18 2011, 13:37:08 UTC

Awww thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It's funny, I wrote these two chapters weeks ago, when I was only up to like Chap. 17. This story just came out, I was hoping when I backtracked and wrote the chapters in the middle that this would all make sense. Thanks so much for your comment!