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The Other Side - Ch. 8

Sep 18, 2011 20:02

Title: The Other Side - Ch.8
Author: kaybee38
Word Count: 2907
Rating: R
Pairings: Minho/Onew, ninja!JongKey, Cousin!Taemin
Genre:vampire, fantasy, sci-fi, character death
Disclaimer: SHinee is owned by SM Entertainment only

Summary: Minho’s a vampire, Key’s a shapeshifter, Jjong is a werewolf and Taemin is a vampire hunter. Jinki is the mortal object of ( Read more... )

kaybee38, pairing: jonghyun/key, pairing: minho/onew, !fic: the other side, taemin, #rating: r, taemin's a pimp

Comments 36

wishunew September 19 2011, 00:32:28 UTC

spot. mine.

wishunew September 19 2011, 18:16:59 UTC

omg what to say to this. idek um. well first. omg Taemin! come to noona, let me cuddle the nightmares away! Jinki is sooooooo cute to stand up to the vampire even though he totally didn't do anything but like, buy them time. poor kid. so he's like... a semi vampire human hybrid thing. lol he's been stuck in transition for so long, no wonder he's so confused. Key and Minho are confused tho. have they not seen a demi vampire before?

/Changmin to the rescuer. bad fucking ass. crossbows > shotguns.
great update, well worth the wait! (and talk about waiting lol, i am the queen of making people wait. if that makes you feel better)

kaybee38 September 20 2011, 04:04:28 UTC

I know. Taemin was pretty sad, but I wanted to provide a reason for how focused and riven he is now. Yep, Jinki's like an unawakened vampire, and Key and Minho are definitely confused.

Yes! Changmin is quite the badass, but there's more to him that's you'll see in the next chapter.

imvus September 19 2011, 00:34:37 UTC

spot! been waiting patiently for this. runs off to read!

imvus September 19 2011, 00:57:43 UTC

ohhhh! I kind of had a feeling that is what had happened. (though I thought it was once not turned and twice you turned)

But yeah, it makes sense that he can have some abilities but all, since he did not fully change.

And I think it kind of funny that Key is so freaked out over Onew and Taemin.

And good grief Minho, you knew that was Key and you still couldn't resist just because he looked like Onew....lol

kaybee38 September 20 2011, 04:05:18 UTC

Glad you liked it! And yes, Minho is pretty turned on by anything that reminds him of Jinx. Thanks for commenting!

scythegyen September 19 2011, 01:18:18 UTC

I soo love this. So so much. Its way too good. I loved the transition you used. And it worked well in my opinion because your descriptions are like reading a movie (stories give you more chance to imagine what you want), and that is a transition that is kinda worn out in movies. It was a nice twist to read it for a change.

P.s. what is the title the video with jonghyun in chap. 7?

kaybee38 September 20 2011, 04:10:22 UTC

Thank you! I was kinda of nervous about the transitions, but I'm glad you followed them . And yes, I got the idea from the movies. Thank you for commenting!

Jonghyun's song is called "Left-Handed". LJ ate the posting I guess :(

Here it is again...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ii3ZbQ8vwl0

scythegyen September 20 2011, 05:32:34 UTC

Thanks a bunch

min7girl September 19 2011, 01:21:35 UTC

Oooooooo, This chapter was sooo goood!!!!!

I loves it!!!! It's all ontae goodness. Gah!!!! and then you added the crazy neighbor Changmin and heechul again! Gah!!! I love this thing!!!!

Of course this means I need to update Love Caste now. *giggles.* Good thing chapter 9 is done :)

Then it will be your turn again!!!

kaybee38 September 20 2011, 04:13:05 UTC

Thanks! Yes, OnTae are very close, and I added Changmin for YOU sweetie! And yes, I need some sexy kitties in my life.

* runs off to read yours*

min7girl September 20 2011, 08:10:26 UTC

You added changmin for me?!!! Oooo thank you!!!

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kaybee38 September 20 2011, 04:13:46 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. If you're confused about anything, just let me know and I'll explain. Thanks for commenting!