The Other Side - Ch. 8

[kaybee38]

Title: The Other Side - Ch.8
Author: kaybee38
Word Count: 2907
Rating: R
Pairings: Minho/Onew, ninja!JongKey, Cousin!Taemin
Genre:vampire, fantasy, sci-fi, character death
Disclaimer: SHinee is owned by SM Entertainment only

Summary: Minho’s a vampire, Key’s a shapeshifter, Jjong is a werewolf and Taemin is a vampire hunter. Jinki is the mortal object of

Comments

[fadedandinsane]

I AM KINDA EXPLODING WITH EXCITEMENT RIGHT NOW, OKAY?

----however, i apparently can't comment properly right now... i'm kind of at a lose for words?

may or may not be back to comment properly, but that does not mean that i didn't like this, just... never mind!!!!

can't wait til your next update!!!

♥

[kaybee38]

um...okay. I think? *scratches head*

[stjoan4eva]

This was perfectly chilling. The transitions were a bit abrupt at first, but as the story progressed they became easier to follow along with.

The flashbacks had me in genuine tears, and it really explains why Taemin and Jinki are the way they are and the true foundations of the relationship. Great work!

[kaybee38]

Thanks! The transitions were meant to be jarring, like "wait, what the?" Because I was trying to articulate how both Jinki and Minho were feeling.

I'm sorry I made you cry bb! But I'm glad that I got the true meaning of their relationship across. Thank you so much for helping me with planning this out. I still go back to our little brainstorming session every time I sit down to work on this!

love it :D

[lee_chiose]

waaaaa >.< I was waiting for this for so long :D

I just love it x3

Just to think that jinki is half vampire (?) = ♥

I cant wait to read the next chapter

I love how you descrive every detail :D

Re: love it :D

[kaybee38]

Thank you for being so patient. I have a a lot going on rn, but I hope to be able to write some more this week. Thank you for commenting!

[acornmama]

RL can be a pain sometimes. But honestly tell me you didn't enjoy writing it out in that little notebook?!!!
This chapter flowed so smoothly, I ate it up. I like this technique where they are both finding answers about what Jinki is. Coincidence or fate, and next to them both is a concerned and just as flustered family member. All but having the same conversation.
Can't wait to find out why Jinx doesn't remember.

[kaybee38]

You know what? I did! I think I'm going to write the next chapter that way too. I'm so happy you understood what I was trying to do! *dances around*. They were both having the same conversation basically, and trying to piece together what happened without all of the information.

Hint: Changmin has a lot to do with Jinki's lack of memory.

[acornmama]

Ha! knew it! Sometimes it can be a lot of fun to write that way.
My favorite part was when Key turned into what he remembered of Jinki and then the voice morphed giving the whole that otherworldly flavor as though for a minute, just a minute they were all in the same room.
Changmin huh? okay.

[addicterated]

every time you update i do this but i can't help it, your fics just make me happy *runs around in happy circles*

okay so, at first the transitions were a little jarring but then i got it and it had a rhythm and it was cool and ow, poor taemin and jinki *pet pets them* and so much cool shit, how do you do this, you are awesome..

is the almost jinki vampireness why minho is so uncontrollably attracted or is it just cause jinki is jinki *g*

i can't wait to see what happens next.

[kaybee38]

Aww. Thank you! I know that OnHo isn't your OTP, so I thought I'd give you a little OnTae love in this chappie. Glad you liked it! Minho is uncontrollably and irrevocably attracted to Jinki because he is sexy as hell....