Your Story Tales - Oneshot

[kayjayloves]

Title:  Your Story Tales
Author: kayjayloves
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: General (Could be taken as Yunjae, Jaechun, if you squinted - Minsu) 
Band: DBSK/TVXQ/THSK
Genre: general
Rating: PG-13
Warning: cussing
Disclaimer: 'fraid I don't own these loves.

Synopsis: It's a constant rise and fall, but they've always been able to ride the tide.

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[firelights]

ME.

[firelights]

Okayokayokay, so this is my emotional rollarcoaster of the day.

First there's that worry that kind of nags you when you're reading, that hope that everything will be okay, pleasepleaseplease - and then, at the end, that sense of relief that yes, maybe everything will be. Nngn. <3

Junsu laughs, an overflow of too-bright sound and skinny limbs spilling into your lap, shattering your attention. “Hyung,” he gasps out, laughing again, “Hyung, tell Changmin he’s wrong.”

Cough. Sorry. Junsu bias.

“It’s… life.” You gesture uselessly with your hands, search for the words. “The four of you, the music - it’s everything, isn’t it? It’s, yeah, it’s life.”

“Yeah.” He laces a hand through yours - seeks comfort in the touch - and closes his eyes.

I love the feeling this gives me - it's so them; Jaejoong's discription, and then what Yoochun says just has me going guhhhh again. Idek why. Sorry. :]

That, combined with the last line, took my breath away.

YOU ROCK. *hugs* ♥

[kayjayloves]

then, at the end, that sense of relief that yes, maybe everything will be.
Hee, I kind of had that feel writing it, like, I wasn't sure if I wanted it completely revovled or not (the fairytaleness of that would kind of make me twitch) but I wanted it to be, well, life xD;;

YOUR JUNSU BIAS IS SHINY AND BRIGHT <3

THANK YOU SO MUCH HUN *glomps* ♥

[samikitty]

awww... poor yunho, trying to be the best leader he can be, and jaejoong being a quiet worrier... i loved the scene in the morning~~ junsu and changmin piling in to sleep all in the same room again~ a show of solidarity. and yunho watching over them all. *O*

[kayjayloves]

Haha, I love the idea of them all piling in the same room - and you're totally right, like a show of solidarity!

<333 for the comment!

[yomi_chan305]

I liked this, very much. ^^ (wow, laaaaame laura. DX)

“The usual,” you say. “Life.” Wow, I love that. It's so simple but it really isn't at the same time... um........

Our msn convo is currently frying my brain, >_> so I'm coming back to this tomorrow. XD *hugs*

[kayjayloves]

>_> *pats* Was it a good brain frying though? xD;

THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT THOUGH. YOU KNOW HOW MUCH IT MEANS TO ME <3 (THIS GOES FOR ALL OF THEM XDD)

<333 for the comment!

[yomi_chan305]

I'M

[shinchul303]

I don't know what it is, but everytime I turn around it seems there's more great writing here. The atmosphere in this is very real. Especially enjoyed your critique of the television show and the "look at me acting". Great contrast to the understated, powerful drama taking place in the apartment.

[kayjayloves]

Oh man, I love it when people catch things I didn't even fully think through myself - like the show and the drama of the apartment. ♥

<333 for the lovely comment!