Lighters and Cardboard Cut-Outs - Oneshot

Sep 05, 2008 16:13

Title: Lighters and Cardboard Cut-Outs  
Author: kayjayloves
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Jaechun
Band: DBSK/THSK/TVXQ
Genre: romance
Rating: PG13
Warning: cussing xD
Disclaimer: 'fraid I don't own these loves.

Synopsis: Jaejoong’s an inevitable comfort; with his hands to lace through Yoochun’s own, and his lips to kiss his forehead, his cheeks (maybe ( Read more... )

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firelights September 5 2008, 22:25:45 UTC
d'awww it's for me. ♥ brb.

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firelights September 5 2008, 22:26:06 UTC
OMG IT'S JAECHUN. ILY SO HARD.

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kayjayloves September 5 2008, 22:41:18 UTC
xDDD

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firelights September 5 2008, 22:48:45 UTC
his bits of air and melodies

AISH I DON'T THINK IT'S GOOD TO FALL IN LOVE SO MANY TIMES IN ONE WEEK.

(Changmin shoots him a bleary-eyed glare) - there’s tears in his eyes. He begs them off as a result of happiness.

the addition of Changmin is brilliant, and this part makes me sad but happy because of the awesome. sorry I make no sense. :[

[Secret:] Yoochun’s heart should come with a ‘Caution: Fragile. Do Not Break’ sign.

I've always had a soft spot for secrets. ♥ Also, I remember seeing this before :DD!!!!!

calls them soul mates, and makes the phrase sound like fact.

I'm so weird, I'm sorry, but I love the addition of fact in here. >.> because jaechun - who they are - and fact.. it doesn't fit, but you make it fit. I really am tired. I MAKE LESS SENSE THAN USUAL DD:

(“Baby, Sweet, Honeycakes.” “Honeycakes?” A stare. A wink.)

HONEYCAKES. I SHOULD CALL YOU THAT FROM NOW ON. AND OMG ILY SO MUCH.

All five of them know reality exists only outside the cameras, away from the one-dimensional cardboard cut-outs they become in ( ... )

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vampy_82 September 5 2008, 23:14:30 UTC
AWWWWW!!!! can't say anything else... so beautiful ^_^

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kayjayloves September 6 2008, 00:09:35 UTC
Wah, thank you!

<333 for the comment!

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vrilly September 5 2008, 23:27:17 UTC
<3 ♥ glorious beautiful jaechun.

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kayjayloves September 6 2008, 00:10:55 UTC
Thank you! ♥

<333 for the comment~

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yomi_chan305 September 5 2008, 23:33:12 UTC
Oo, what a nice thing to come home to on Friday. XD

"Quiet laughter (ironic), because maybe he fits that tragic musician mold just as well, living on his bits of air and melodies."
Ahhhh tragic musician. For some reason that just touches me. ♥

"[Secret:] Yoochun’s heart should come with a ‘Caution: Fragile. Do Not Break’ sign."
I remember this. XD

"Jaejoong shatters in smaller, more subtle pieces than Yoochun’s ever been able to manage; he ends up with stream-lined cracks noticeable even from a distance."
This too.

"[Secret:] Yoochun never has to tell Jaejoong his secrets, because Jaejoong already knows."
Really thats just the perfect ending line. Simple yet effective. ^^

Lovely as always dear.

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kayjayloves September 6 2008, 00:12:19 UTC
I try my hardest to make Fridays good xPP

Ah yeah, I have a fondness for the whole tragic musician idea too xD

Fragile. Do Not Break’ sign."
I remember this. XD
Yeaah >_> The drabble wasn't going anywhere so i deconstructed it and stuck it in the fic xD

I'm glad you liked the ending! And the way you described it! ♥

Thank you! <33333

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mimei September 5 2008, 23:54:38 UTC
Picture perfect, like something Yoochun’s hands ache to compose.


i love the way you describe things falling apart ♥

random thought: i do wonder if their public personas are four-dimensional rather than one-dimensional, considering the way the idol industry runs on personality, as bare & invasive as can be...

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kayjayloves September 6 2008, 00:15:45 UTC
I'm glad you liked it ♥ and you picked my favorite line

Yeah :O Interesting thought. But in a way, I think the personality becomes based off traits - certain things that stick out, and are built upon, which makes it one-dimensional off a projection of those few traits? But now you have me thinking xD

<333 for the comment~

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