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xela_fic July 13 2008, 06:19:14 UTC
I so enjoyed this! :) Oh samanddean. Really well done. Kudos.

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kaynara July 14 2008, 06:13:46 UTC
Yes. Sam and Dean. They're irresistible. :)

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vain_chan July 13 2008, 06:41:08 UTC
I'm not super into 'Give the boys a kid' fics--mainly because I haven't seen on that's very well done until now--but this was fantastic. I liked everything, from Sam & Dean's relationship, to Ryan, to weaving the case through the fic, to those little snippets of hell-changed!Dean and antichrist!Sam. Brava! ♥

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kaynara July 14 2008, 06:14:37 UTC
I'm so glad you liked Layla/Ryan! She was fun to write.

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mre_quecky July 13 2008, 11:10:14 UTC
Loved this story! Awesome :D

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kaynara July 14 2008, 06:14:45 UTC
Thanks!

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iyalode July 13 2008, 12:47:42 UTC
I hope like heaven you're going to be writing more spn fic. Because this is a wonderful story and I can't wait to see what else you come up with.

As for the story itself, you have the boys down pat. Your OC was fantastic and the plot was awesome.

Great read. Thank you.

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kaynara July 14 2008, 06:15:03 UTC
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed!

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livrelibre July 13 2008, 19:11:08 UTC
This was great! The characterizations were awesome and you did a good job at making Ryan a real little girl, the plot interesting (I like the idea of demon family dynamics) and the slide into domestic life believable. Thanks for a great read and hope to see more!

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kaynara July 14 2008, 06:15:28 UTC
I'm glad you thought Ryan was believable. Thanks!

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