THIS - in the Jane's Death series - is my absolute favorite so far. I LOVE this! Can't even pick just one part to call my fave because there are way more then one. So here are two:
The entire paragraph that began: "The little touches and looks between them added to their bond in subtle ways..." LOVED IT!
The entire part where Cho finds out Jane has been misbehaving and reels Jane in. That image of Cho and how he was in that whole section: DELICIOUS!
Yep - this part of the series is definitely my favorite. FANTASTIC WORK!!!!
I cannot tell you how much I'm loving this series! You have yet to write a line, be it action, thought, or spoken word, where I said "huh? that's not how they would act". Cho is delightfully evil... "I'm glad you understand me now. You'll behave? Treat the staff with respect?" He is becoming an expert in the handling and taming of the wild "Jane". *sigh* I must now go back to the real world, where I will wait patiently for the next chapter of this great story. *sigh*
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The entire paragraph that began: "The little touches and looks between them added to their bond in subtle ways..." LOVED IT!
The entire part where Cho finds out Jane has been misbehaving and reels Jane in. That image of Cho and how he was in that whole section: DELICIOUS!
Yep - this part of the series is definitely my favorite. FANTASTIC WORK!!!!
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Cho is delightfully evil...
"I'm glad you understand me now. You'll behave? Treat the staff with respect?"
He is becoming an expert in the handling and taming of the wild "Jane".
*sigh* I must now go back to the real world, where I will wait patiently for the next chapter of this great story. *sigh*
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