Comments | kaytee4ever: Another snippet from Jane's Death part 4: Sex Life

kaytee4ever

Another snippet from Jane's Death part 4: Sex Life

Feb 07, 2010 13:47

Thanks to pirbid for inspiring me to pick up my story again.

Okay, here's a scene from about the middle of part 4, the next day. A grocery trip. Hee. Even a grocery trip is diff with Jane around.

What do you think?
( even the grocery store is an adventure with Jane around... )

mentalist, series: jane's death, cho/jane, jane/cho

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Love Cho's cucumber! pirbid February 8 2010, 00:05:14 UTC

LOL, that was really good fun. Cho's comeback was priceless. Loved it. The end was sweet, thanks to Jane, again. Good work!

I just posted another comment without realizing I wasn't logged in, but I hate to be an 'anonymous', so posted again. ;)

Re: Love Cho's cucumber! kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 00:14:43 UTC

Hee! Thanks. Actually, Cho's comeback about the condoms was the first thing I wrote in this part! hee. :)

Aw, yeah, Jane has his moments.

So glad you like!

Thanks to SB being online, I got another scene written. woot!

Re: Love Cho's cucumber! pirbid February 8 2010, 00:53:56 UTC

Yeah, SB and you seem to make a good TM fic combo. I'll be awaiting any new bits any of you may be posting.

Re: Love Cho's cucumber! kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 01:34:45 UTC

hee. yes, SB and I and TM fic are a good combo. Thank goodness we're finally on chat for the first time in a week! :)

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Finally! stella_bryce February 8 2010, 00:16:53 UTC

Well, FINALLY you got this up! I was wondering what the hold up was. You already know how I feel about this scene! I absolutely LOVE it! This was so much fun! Lots of laughs. Jane is such a stinker!

Re: Finally! kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 01:36:06 UTC

well I was hoping to get it ALL DONE first. But I gave up. bah.

Just going to write that flashback bit and then will post everything through the grocery store as the first half.

*purrrrrrrrrrrrs at your icon* Cho!