LUSCIOUS STORY!!

[kayteelou]

FANFIC! Finally :) I don't know if I like this or not. It didn't take long but I quite like it at the beginning. It falters towards the end because I was just trying to get it done before the night was out.

Inspired very much by this picture;

Comments

[karuhime]

This really touched me. My heart ached for Lucius at the last part when he imagined the past with Draco and Narcissa. Poor poor Lucius... Every fangirl would want at least ONCE in their lifetime to play with Lucius' broken emotions, and secretly nursing him back to his proud self again.

[kayteelou]

I would long to nurse Lucius back to health ;D
That's why i had this idea tbh, Lucius is such a proud and arrogant man, he seems so difficult to bully. And I figured theres a very noticable change in his characters from the end of OotP and the beginning of Deathly Hallows, after spending a year in Azkaban. Surely it changed something, or something happened to him to make him realise things he didn't before. I'd love to see Lucius all vulnerable, just to see the change in his character and how he would react to the way he was feeling. Deathly Hallows ftw! Can't wait :D

Thankyou for your comment though, no one has reviewed this fic on fanfiction.net yet, and no comments on here so I figured it was a bit of shit writing I'd done :/

[karuhime]

D: You gotta be kidding me! This piece is BEAUTIFUL! I do love vulnerable side of Lucius too, just to show that he's also human like the rest of us. It's sooo hard to find good fanfics about this side of Lucius, and most of the time even when they portrait Lucius this way, he's hardly the main character and always get glossed over. :[

And don't worry about the number of reviews, have more confident in your writing because I really enjoyed this fic :]. If it helps to know, I stalked lj for a long while now looking for good fanfics and this is the first time I've commented on a fic here^^ I'd love to see more of vulnerable Lucius in the future :o Maybe something that can be elaborated into a long fic instead of one-shot~ That would totally make my day. ^-^

[wraithhybrid]

aw! this is sadistic :((. and depressing. have some mercy,please?