Aaahh.. it's hard to sit still and read. It's so hot that it burns. And it's not only because of the plot. You have written it truly well (it's not rushed or overly descriptive, correct portion of everything for the perfect mix)! Plus this isn't all about sex or lust, it's about feelings too.
Oh WOW, "thank you" doesn't seem like enough.mugen_ai3April 14 2013, 23:36:51 UTC
First off let me just tell you that you know me better thank anyone, I think. Oh wow this was lovely and perfect. I don't even know where to begin. I read this a while ago but I wanted to have a day off where I could comment properly.
So, here goes:
I am so grateful for Alice as well. Please thanks her for me. I can't even imagine most of the things you've written. Jun's eagerness, his obedience, his unintentional disobedience.
Your prose is amazing the way you describe things, like Nino's first orgasm. Ropes. Beautiful.
Next is some caps abuse, I told myself I wouldn't flail but it cannot be helped.
I ASKED FOR DOMINANT!AIBA DIDN'T I? I READ TOP!AIBA FICS ALL THE TIME, HOWEVER, NOTHING COULD HAVE PREPARED MY HEART FOR THE ABSOLUTENESS OF DOM!AIBA. HOW DID YOU DREAM OF THIS? HE'S PERFECT IN EVERY WAY, WHERE CAN I SIGN UP TO BE HIS HAMSTER, SECOND KITTY? I DUNNO.
I JUST WANT TO GIVE YOU ALL THE COOKIES IN THE UNIVERSE FOR WRITING ME THIS AIBA. So many people don't write him in this way I am always glad when someone does, it
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I enjoyed the feelings between Aiba and Nino and how Jun became aware that that's too what he wants in a dom-sub relationship and how he can enjoy his sexuality in a different way without feeling bad about it (loved how Aiba noticed the problem and reassured him, the image of Jun leting it go and crying in Aiba's arms is kind of beautiful). Really all those feelings and the kind of master that is Aiba in this fic made it for me.
Also, it's sweet that Nino changed from "Aiba is mine" to asking for Jun and smiling wide to him in the club. I wonder how Aiba will manage with 3 subs now and what Satoko would think about the incorporation of a new pet and what are her feelings for Aiba.
Really a hot and powerful fic, thanks for sharing!
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Just. Perfect!
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Well, this is good XDD And I enjoyed it, a lot...
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So, here goes:
I am so grateful for Alice as well. Please thanks her for me. I can't even imagine most of the things you've written. Jun's eagerness, his obedience, his unintentional disobedience.
Your prose is amazing the way you describe things, like Nino's first orgasm. Ropes. Beautiful.
Next is some caps abuse, I told myself I wouldn't flail but it cannot be helped.
I ASKED FOR DOMINANT!AIBA DIDN'T I? I READ TOP!AIBA FICS ALL THE TIME, HOWEVER, NOTHING COULD HAVE PREPARED MY HEART FOR THE ABSOLUTENESS OF DOM!AIBA. HOW DID YOU DREAM OF THIS? HE'S PERFECT IN EVERY WAY, WHERE CAN I SIGN UP TO BE HIS HAMSTER, SECOND KITTY? I DUNNO.
I JUST WANT TO GIVE YOU ALL THE COOKIES IN THE UNIVERSE FOR WRITING ME THIS AIBA. So many people don't write him in this way I am always glad when someone does, it ( ... )
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Also, it's sweet that Nino changed from "Aiba is mine" to asking for Jun and smiling wide to him in the club. I wonder how Aiba will manage with 3 subs now and what Satoko would think about the incorporation of a new pet and what are her feelings for Aiba.
Really a hot and powerful fic, thanks for sharing!
Sorry I had to edit it, mods.
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